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Comment from Walu Feral
Well done mate! I really enjoy this irish limerick style of poetry. I love the way it sings and flows. Good job and peace to you. Cheers Fez.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
Well done mate! I really enjoy this irish limerick style of poetry. I love the way it sings and flows. Good job and peace to you. Cheers Fez.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thank you Fez. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This was indeed a fun read. i do love the Irish accent and their way of saying things. I would love to visit Ireland some day. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
This was indeed a fun read. i do love the Irish accent and their way of saying things. I would love to visit Ireland some day. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thank you Evelyn. I would like to someday too!
Comment from Robin Gilmor
"Tis a TALL tale I'm reading for sure at the hands of Treischel's pen. Such a delight, said Paddy that night, that night he went for his swim! Terrific
my dear friend. Robin :)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
"Tis a TALL tale I'm reading for sure at the hands of Treischel's pen. Such a delight, said Paddy that night, that night he went for his swim! Terrific
my dear friend. Robin :)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thank you Robin. I have to admit that your airport fairies inspired me to write this. I spent some time researching Irish folk tales, but finally gave up and made this one up.
Comment from Joannforsberg
LOL. Good ST. Patty's day poem. I don't even know what day it is on yet? That is a sorry state of affairs to be that behind in a normal society event. The ending of course is wonderful.
JO
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
LOL. Good ST. Patty's day poem. I don't even know what day it is on yet? That is a sorry state of affairs to be that behind in a normal society event. The ending of course is wonderful.
JO
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thanks Jo. Relax and smell the roses.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
HEHE MR T YOU HIT THE FUNNY FIN ON THIS ONE THATS FOR SURE GREAT LINES HAVE TO MAKE SURE HAWAIIAN MERMAIDS READS THIS ONE
TK
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
HEHE MR T YOU HIT THE FUNNY FIN ON THIS ONE THATS FOR SURE GREAT LINES HAVE TO MAKE SURE HAWAIIAN MERMAIDS READS THIS ONE
TK
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thanks Sir T. Yes, she should get a kick out of it.
Comment from janalma
Cute, and that wily Paddy is the winner. Ha. I enjoyed reading this little tale of overcoming the odds to have sex in the sea with the beautiful mermaids. Don't know much about poetry but think this sounded good.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
Cute, and that wily Paddy is the winner. Ha. I enjoyed reading this little tale of overcoming the odds to have sex in the sea with the beautiful mermaids. Don't know much about poetry but think this sounded good.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much janalma.
Comment from Indie Skreet
a witty poem and love the reference to Peter O'toole. You wound it up well in the last lines and the rhythm is perfect. best Indie
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
a witty poem and love the reference to Peter O'toole. You wound it up well in the last lines and the rhythm is perfect. best Indie
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you Indie.
Comment from Heidixoxo
What a great piece of poetry telling such a cute story for St. Patrick's Day!! It was fun to read and I really liked it. You have done a nice job with this and I wish all the luck in your future postings....xoxo
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
What a great piece of poetry telling such a cute story for St. Patrick's Day!! It was fun to read and I really liked it. You have done a nice job with this and I wish all the luck in your future postings....xoxo
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thanks Heidixoxo. I appreciate your review and good wishes.
Comment from Gungalo
A great write in quatrains for St. Paddie's Day I'd say. LOL it didn't take too much for the following to happen:
Say what you may of Paddy O'Dea
After he got wind in his sails.
But it may explain why they look that way,
Since all of his children have scales.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
A great write in quatrains for St. Paddie's Day I'd say. LOL it didn't take too much for the following to happen:
Say what you may of Paddy O'Dea
After he got wind in his sails.
But it may explain why they look that way,
Since all of his children have scales.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank Gungalo. That's a story for another day!