All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Ode to Me!"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Paradox Tremors
I have to admit, after reading this, I left with a smile on my face and a spring of joy and laughter in my heart. It's amazing the treasures you can find on this site when you look. Appreciate the sharing of the moment and the happiness you must have felt when writing this. Have a good and peaceful night my friend.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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I have to admit, after reading this, I left with a smile on my face and a spring of joy and laughter in my heart. It's amazing the treasures you can find on this site when you look. Appreciate the sharing of the moment and the happiness you must have felt when writing this. Have a good and peaceful night my friend.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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thx so much, PT - good to spread that feeling around a little, hmm? Bless you for enjoying!
:)Sharyn
Comment from c_lucas
Everyday one wakes up alive and healthy, one should sing praises to oneself. Your well written poem shows an exuberance to life.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Everyday one wakes up alive and healthy, one should sing praises to oneself. Your well written poem shows an exuberance to life.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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absolutely, Charlie! Why not?
Blessings,
Sharyn
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You're welcome, Sharyn. Charlie
Comment from yonashalom
Hah, you sure are funny! I love it. Why not? Me! :)
This made me laugh ...
or the neighbor's dogs that bark too much
but have yellow, innocent eyes
Sounds like a dog with rabies! LOL
Goodness, thanks for the laugh. Lots of humor in this, as always.
Good luck. ~Yona
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Hah, you sure are funny! I love it. Why not? Me! :)
This made me laugh ...
or the neighbor's dogs that bark too much
but have yellow, innocent eyes
Sounds like a dog with rabies! LOL
Goodness, thanks for the laugh. Lots of humor in this, as always.
Good luck. ~Yona
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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thx so much Yona! :)))Sharyn
Comment from Creative77
Wow, what a great poem! You've expressed your true thoughts with such love and vibrance. Excellent job! Keep up the positive work!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Wow, what a great poem! You've expressed your true thoughts with such love and vibrance. Excellent job! Keep up the positive work!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Thx so much C77! Blessings, Sharyn
Comment from skye
You and Walt.. made it all clear, beautiful, and the celebration of YOU goes on and on.
I love this poem. I love free verse, with some rhymes.
I love uplifting, happy poems.
You made this one truly a party.
Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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You and Walt.. made it all clear, beautiful, and the celebration of YOU goes on and on.
I love this poem. I love free verse, with some rhymes.
I love uplifting, happy poems.
You made this one truly a party.
Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Glad you were able to come to the party skye! :)Sharyn
Comment from GWHARGIS
I haven't had one of those days in a while. The poem was up lifting and happy. Your wrote with a very thankful voice. The flow and the rhythm were great. Favorite line...I got on the scale and I wasn't as fat as I thought I was.
Great poem.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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I haven't had one of those days in a while. The poem was up lifting and happy. Your wrote with a very thankful voice. The flow and the rhythm were great. Favorite line...I got on the scale and I wasn't as fat as I thought I was.
Great poem.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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It's nice to MAKE one of those days sometimes, GW - amazing what a little peace & quiet on a beautiful afternoon can do for one's soul! Blessings, as always,
Sharyn
Comment from fairy77
Loved it Sharyn from the banana bread to the sandy toes. It had your name from the start. Glad your losing weight. All I eat is Chinese. Great piece friend. Congrats! Beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Loved it Sharyn from the banana bread to the sandy toes. It had your name from the start. Glad your losing weight. All I eat is Chinese. Great piece friend. Congrats! Beth fairy77.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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There you are - LOVE Chinese!!! and LOVE your LOVELY MAGIC SIX Beth, thank you so very much. I was hoping you'd like this one! :)Sharyn
Comment from MizKat
Visionary1234 - Just forgetful OLD me, who doesn't remember your name for sure, Sharyn, I think. Anyway I love your poem and see it's on the front page. Good for you. Sorry I haven't been around for a few days, but I've been fighting the flu bug. Still not up to par with head and body aches, plus still running to the bathroom. Kat
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Visionary1234 - Just forgetful OLD me, who doesn't remember your name for sure, Sharyn, I think. Anyway I love your poem and see it's on the front page. Good for you. Sorry I haven't been around for a few days, but I've been fighting the flu bug. Still not up to par with head and body aches, plus still running to the bathroom. Kat
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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oh poor Kat - that flu will knock you out cold. Hope you're on the mend! (And hopefully this poem will help - it was a fun one). Bless you, as always - and big hugs for recovery!
Sharyn
Comment from God's Writer
A wonderful poem to honor yourself with. Very upbeat and positive. Thank you for these wonderful words of encouragement.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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A wonderful poem to honor yourself with. Very upbeat and positive. Thank you for these wonderful words of encouragement.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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thank you lovely Erick! :)Sharyn
Comment from gypsycaravan
I celebrate YOU. What a delightful, glad-I-got-up-this-morning poem. and yes, a cooperative scale can bring that feeling out in all of us. The art you chose for the poem was terrific, too. Great job.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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I celebrate YOU. What a delightful, glad-I-got-up-this-morning poem. and yes, a cooperative scale can bring that feeling out in all of us. The art you chose for the poem was terrific, too. Great job.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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thx so much gypsy! :)Sharyn