Angel
Angel is a poem i wrote about my mom when she died in 2009.3 total reviews
Comment from snemes
This is a lovely way to remember your mother. I like how you described her as always being there to guide you. I also thought that the descriptions of her were beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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This is a lovely way to remember your mother. I like how you described her as always being there to guide you. I also thought that the descriptions of her were beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2013
Comment from Lisa Charlie
Great poem!
I liked that you referred to your Mother as an Angel! Many of us like to lovingly refer to our that way.
I did see the following grammatical error that needs correcting:
Look up and above and ask god PLEASE
(also remove the first AND in this line)
Great piece and and an enjoyable read!
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Great poem!
I liked that you referred to your Mother as an Angel! Many of us like to lovingly refer to our that way.
I did see the following grammatical error that needs correcting:
Look up and above and ask god PLEASE
(also remove the first AND in this line)
Great piece and and an enjoyable read!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
Comment from TonyD
The loss is obvious but is made tolerable by having a constant presence that guides and protects. I can envisage anyone reading your poem would find solace in their loss.
Keep up the good work.
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The loss is obvious but is made tolerable by having a constant presence that guides and protects. I can envisage anyone reading your poem would find solace in their loss.
Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013