Dear God
Dear God Contest Submission5 total reviews
Comment from Galactia
beautiful letter to God, you did a wonderful job constructing this story. May he bless you and grant your desires.
regards
Tia
GL in the contest
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beautiful letter to God, you did a wonderful job constructing this story. May he bless you and grant your desires.
regards
Tia
GL in the contest
Comment Written 06-May-2012
Comment from katmckeown
I give you 5 stars for writing from your heart. Know that I will agree with you in prayer. You appear to have meet you criteria so I will simple say. AMEN. Good luck.
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I give you 5 stars for writing from your heart. Know that I will agree with you in prayer. You appear to have meet you criteria so I will simple say. AMEN. Good luck.
Comment Written 05-May-2012
Comment from mommerry
Your humility in admitting to your weaknesses and asking for strength in particular areas is what prayer should be. Good job - I have nothing to say that would improve your work.
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Your humility in admitting to your weaknesses and asking for strength in particular areas is what prayer should be. Good job - I have nothing to say that would improve your work.
Comment Written 05-May-2012
Comment from Starlit Ink
This is beautiful and heartfelt, wanting to be everything that you can be despite the oppositions of people and worry. In the last line of your letter, it should be mold instead of mould. Otherwise it's great and good luck. I could relate to the sentiment so had to give you a 6.
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This is beautiful and heartfelt, wanting to be everything that you can be despite the oppositions of people and worry. In the last line of your letter, it should be mold instead of mould. Otherwise it's great and good luck. I could relate to the sentiment so had to give you a 6.
Comment Written 04-May-2012
Comment from al1801
..That's a prayer and a good one too, I like it without all the thees and thous - this is after all, Century 21. I'd like to look upon a prayer as a chat between father and son. You dsid that.
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..That's a prayer and a good one too, I like it without all the thees and thous - this is after all, Century 21. I'd like to look upon a prayer as a chat between father and son. You dsid that.
Comment Written 04-May-2012