I and soul
Simple thoughts in poetic form3 total reviews
Comment from debsjubilantpoetry
Dear Criti. your second line of your first verse has 9 syllables and should only have 7 and the third line has 6 and should only have 5. Ok I won't go on. a 5-7-5 poem has 5 syllables in the first and third lines and 7 syllables in the 2 line. that is why it's called a 5-7-5. It usually has one verse. try to see what you can do to get the correct form for the contest. I really want you to win. hugs to you. debs
not trying to be mean; just helping your to learn and win.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Dear Criti. your second line of your first verse has 9 syllables and should only have 7 and the third line has 6 and should only have 5. Ok I won't go on. a 5-7-5 poem has 5 syllables in the first and third lines and 7 syllables in the 2 line. that is why it's called a 5-7-5. It usually has one verse. try to see what you can do to get the correct form for the contest. I really want you to win. hugs to you. debs
not trying to be mean; just helping your to learn and win.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Much appreciated thank you.
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you're welcome creti. I'm always afraid I will make someone angry if I tell them what I see wrong. It happened to me the very first time I did it, so it's made me a bit skiddish. hugs debs
Comment from Adri7enne
Just a blank where the poem should be. You better bring it back and try pasting it again. Good luck with your efforts. I'll give you 5 for the benefit of the doubt.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2011
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Just a blank where the poem should be. You better bring it back and try pasting it again. Good luck with your efforts. I'll give you 5 for the benefit of the doubt.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2011
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much appreciated...thanku
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
The words in this poem are deep an meaningful but impossible to read without highlighting them first. White writing on pink background doesn't work. You need a combination of light and dark for best effect.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2011
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The words in this poem are deep an meaningful but impossible to read without highlighting them first. White writing on pink background doesn't work. You need a combination of light and dark for best effect.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2011
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Thank you. I am a beginner and such words are very much needed.:)