CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 121 "Been There, Done That!"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Curt Mongold
Therein lies the temptation you have given into!
Oh, for shame, cuz! Four words? Did you feel guilty doing it? I know I do!
It's still a great poem, and I always like the style (lol)
but since you have already went and done it, I suppose it's alright...THIS time!! LOL!
Sincerely,
Curt
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2008
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Therein lies the temptation you have given into!
Oh, for shame, cuz! Four words? Did you feel guilty doing it? I know I do!
It's still a great poem, and I always like the style (lol)
but since you have already went and done it, I suppose it's alright...THIS time!! LOL!
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 27-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2008
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*bowing and scraping*....cuz, I thank you for not beating the hell out of me! HA!!! But, as you can see, 4 syllables is SO inferior to the required 3 syllables. Just doesn't have that "thing"!! So, I won't tinker with it any more. :-)) Sue
Comment from dportwood
Sixteezkid,
Cute little poem. You've turned the corner and accepted who you are. I haven't done that yet. Still have to sneak up on the mirror. Each added year brings sadder tear.
Duane
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Sixteezkid,
Cute little poem. You've turned the corner and accepted who you are. I haven't done that yet. Still have to sneak up on the mirror. Each added year brings sadder tear.
Duane
Comment Written 24-Dec-2008
Comment from rmdelta
Sue,
Ah-finally a poem written for the ignorant to understand. Seems I understand them when they discuss getting old and are filled with memories of youth. Thank you, Sue. I really appreciate your finally writing one just for me. lol
Enjoyed it immensely. Well done, my friend.
Reggie
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2008
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Sue,
Ah-finally a poem written for the ignorant to understand. Seems I understand them when they discuss getting old and are filled with memories of youth. Thank you, Sue. I really appreciate your finally writing one just for me. lol
Enjoyed it immensely. Well done, my friend.
Reggie
Comment Written 24-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2008
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Yes, just a very simple ditty here, Reggie. Had to post something light to balance out the scale from my last heavy post! HA! And I most certainly had you in mind for this one! Merry Christmas, Reggie.......Sue
Comment from adewpearl
I'm getting good enough at recognizing this style that I actually said to myself while reading - there are 4 rhymes!
You've made very good use of this multiple internal rhyming and the jazzy sound of the style - a most upbeat look at maturing!
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I'm getting good enough at recognizing this style that I actually said to myself while reading - there are 4 rhymes!
You've made very good use of this multiple internal rhyming and the jazzy sound of the style - a most upbeat look at maturing!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2008
Comment from Algernon
There is nothing more appealing that a mature woman, who is happy and content in herself.
The poem is one of enjoying liberation. Crying, FREEDOM! lol
A real beaut of a poem.
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There is nothing more appealing that a mature woman, who is happy and content in herself.
The poem is one of enjoying liberation. Crying, FREEDOM! lol
A real beaut of a poem.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2008
Comment from TinyTeena
Very, very clever! Light fun and entertaining. the rhyming is marvellous and amazing that you could find so many sililar sounding words. It's a very realistic presentation of growing up from youth to adult - and prefer to be adult. "age" referred to is teenage years.A fun poem
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Very, very clever! Light fun and entertaining. the rhyming is marvellous and amazing that you could find so many sililar sounding words. It's a very realistic presentation of growing up from youth to adult - and prefer to be adult. "age" referred to is teenage years.A fun poem
Comment Written 24-Dec-2008
Comment from rama devi
Marvelous! This is charming and insightful. Quite cute and clever, with witty tone. Well done vers beaucoup.
Loved this:
That's a wrinkle! Make-up sprinkle,
now I twinkle. Used to smolder, now I'm older,
but much bolder
well presented and not a nit to fix.
:)
Warm regards,
rama devi
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Marvelous! This is charming and insightful. Quite cute and clever, with witty tone. Well done vers beaucoup.
Loved this:
That's a wrinkle! Make-up sprinkle,
now I twinkle. Used to smolder, now I'm older,
but much bolder
well presented and not a nit to fix.
:)
Warm regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 24-Dec-2008
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue.
Maybe you could make this your own invention;
'Sue's Vers Beaucoup'. LOL!
'Sung songs unsung' - tied my tongue up but grest fun.
'Such joie de vivre, and so naive' Blimey, you speak Swahili? LOL ('joy of life' I think) Too clever for this place. 'could not concieve' and got six kids, blimey, made up for lost time!
I'm OK as even though I'm over thirty now, I've retained my youthful looks, which you imply not ta have done, though if that's you in the pic. I'd disagree.
Great poem. Best wishes, Ray xx
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Hi, Sue.
Maybe you could make this your own invention;
'Sue's Vers Beaucoup'. LOL!
'Sung songs unsung' - tied my tongue up but grest fun.
'Such joie de vivre, and so naive' Blimey, you speak Swahili? LOL ('joy of life' I think) Too clever for this place. 'could not concieve' and got six kids, blimey, made up for lost time!
I'm OK as even though I'm over thirty now, I've retained my youthful looks, which you imply not ta have done, though if that's you in the pic. I'd disagree.
Great poem. Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 24-Dec-2008
Comment from Hitcher
There you go again breaking the rules, making them up as you go along! I have to admire your spunk my content? Friend, I'm now mature with more allure! Me too! Nice one branch shaker.
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There you go again breaking the rules, making them up as you go along! I have to admire your spunk my content? Friend, I'm now mature with more allure! Me too! Nice one branch shaker.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2008
Comment from Dianemae
Excellent poem. You did a really good job. Many of the thoughts are right on target. Like 'don't give a damm.' Beauty and youth are in the eyes of the beholder.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2008
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Excellent poem. You did a really good job. Many of the thoughts are right on target. Like 'don't give a damm.' Beauty and youth are in the eyes of the beholder.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2008
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Dianemae, thanks so much for your very kind review. I was reading Sylvia Plath's poem, "Mirror" and thought I'd make a fun poem about the mirror! Again, many thanks. With regards, Sue