Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "The Aha! Moment"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
3 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Another great chapter, really good writing structure. And separation of dialogue, great job, what a nice surprise in here too. Your book has lots of twists and turns. What'd I find extremely interesting. Pen to paper and look what happens, eh?
Excellent work for talented writer. Consider publishing.Of course, there's only one thing to be done about this one!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Another great chapter, really good writing structure. And separation of dialogue, great job, what a nice surprise in here too. Your book has lots of twists and turns. What'd I find extremely interesting. Pen to paper and look what happens, eh?
Excellent work for talented writer. Consider publishing.Of course, there's only one thing to be done about this one!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Thank you and congratulations on your Aspire Award for your book Ghost - for the International Impact Award - Overcoming adversity.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed how your story. I was hooked from start to finish! I loved how you built suspense with the mysterious package. The detail about the scattered papers made the scene feel so real! And that twist with the cell phone records was perfect. This is shaping up to be a gripping mystery! I can't wait to see where it goes next!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
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I really enjoyed how your story. I was hooked from start to finish! I loved how you built suspense with the mysterious package. The detail about the scattered papers made the scene feel so real! And that twist with the cell phone records was perfect. This is shaping up to be a gripping mystery! I can't wait to see where it goes next!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
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Ah Michael - I have finished writing the story - the final chapters are to come. I will spend the next few months editing it and those edits may show up on fanstory. I will also be writing about Cindra's story. What do you think?
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and it was a pleasure to listen to as it flows very well when it is read aloud, your sentence structure, and your paragraphing along with your punctuation, make it so that it is very easy to listen to.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
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This is very well written, and it was a pleasure to listen to as it flows very well when it is read aloud, your sentence structure, and your paragraphing along with your punctuation, make it so that it is very easy to listen to.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for the read and the stars - the book is finished. i will be adding more chapters shortly
