Panic
an acrostic about a situation i'm in3 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem is well-written with an emphasis on panic or an unsettled feeling. Favorite line: You're giving the empath a heart of stone.
I think your rhymes add a sense of pounding lyricism here.
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This poem is well-written with an emphasis on panic or an unsettled feeling. Favorite line: You're giving the empath a heart of stone.
I think your rhymes add a sense of pounding lyricism here.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is packed with raw emotion. I can feel every ounce of frustration and exhaustion in your words. I really love how direct this is - you're not sugarcoating anything. That honesty is perfect! So well done! Keep it up! Keep writing!
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Your poem is packed with raw emotion. I can feel every ounce of frustration and exhaustion in your words. I really love how direct this is - you're not sugarcoating anything. That honesty is perfect! So well done! Keep it up! Keep writing!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
What is going on here? If your husband has children acting like his wife, that's child abuse and has nothing to do with the children. This is an extended poem at the end and there is a lot of pain and misdirected anger. Children must be protected by adults. If an adult holds in what they know about child abuse, they are criminal. Period.
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What is going on here? If your husband has children acting like his wife, that's child abuse and has nothing to do with the children. This is an extended poem at the end and there is a lot of pain and misdirected anger. Children must be protected by adults. If an adult holds in what they know about child abuse, they are criminal. Period.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
