Screams of the Shadows
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Descent"In the dark, the screams never stop.
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story kept me on the edge of my seat! I love how you build the tension. The glowing symbols and the phone buzzing create such a great sense of urgency. I felt Sarah's desperation as she clutched the case. I can really feel the chaos and the danger. I can't wait to see what happens next - so much suspense! Keep up the great work!
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Your story kept me on the edge of my seat! I love how you build the tension. The glowing symbols and the phone buzzing create such a great sense of urgency. I felt Sarah's desperation as she clutched the case. I can really feel the chaos and the danger. I can't wait to see what happens next - so much suspense! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
Comment from Begin Again
It's three in the morning and I am sitting here in a dark room feeling the tension and then finally falling..... and there's no bottom! What are you up to, Marilyn. My heart is thumping! On to the next chapter for answers, I hope!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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It's three in the morning and I am sitting here in a dark room feeling the tension and then finally falling..... and there's no bottom! What are you up to, Marilyn. My heart is thumping! On to the next chapter for answers, I hope!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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i will soon put you out of your misery
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I don't know how much more this old body can take! LOL
