Comment from EILEEN LAW

Exceptional

Impactful!
I loved it. It struck my with both its simplicity and its message. So much to say in so little words. I enjoyed the picture as well.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024

Bless you Eileen
Take care

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is so so full of feeling. I love how you capture such a big, powerful emotion in just a few words. "Warm heart" and "Beating for you" really hit me with its tenderness. It's beautiful how you let the words flow without needing anything extra. Great job!

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled that my poem resonated with you. Capturing deep emotions in a few words is always my aim, and it's wonderful to know that the tenderness and simplicity came through. Your feedback truly means a lot to me!
Take care

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

I'm sorry but the second line, beats for you, is only three syllables instead of four like the requirements of the contest of a 2-4-2 poem. In the notes, it says endless love well, that would have been a better way to express your affection anyway.
Jesse

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Hi Jesse
Thank you so much for the correction which I have made. That was careless of me and because of this did not deserve your high rating.
Take care

reply by Jesse James Doty on 07-Dec-2024

Glad I could help.
Jesse