Prayer at the bridge.
A poem10 total reviews
Comment from Nicole Dover
This reminds me of older poetry - the wording and style. Very well done. I do not think the title is fitting though - unless it has Biblical meaning I'm not aware of.
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This reminds me of older poetry - the wording and style. Very well done. I do not think the title is fitting though - unless it has Biblical meaning I'm not aware of.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Angel Debbie
I thank you Father for my birth.
'because in Christ I now have worth.
I love these lines they are so powerful and top off the rest of the write so beautifully! Thank You for sharing. Have a wonderful Friday!
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I thank you Father for my birth.
'because in Christ I now have worth.
I love these lines they are so powerful and top off the rest of the write so beautifully! Thank You for sharing. Have a wonderful Friday!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A great poem sharing your faith with others. You are grateful, as am I, for the redemption of God and the sacrifice of His Son. He's made us whole and clean.
Take care,
Rhonda
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A great poem sharing your faith with others. You are grateful, as am I, for the redemption of God and the sacrifice of His Son. He's made us whole and clean.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Roy,
I was just praying for the saints of God; to bind us together in grace and love in the end times as never before. We need Him and one another. A beautiful, encouraging poem of our deep faith in Christ.
Blessings to you and yours,
Sal Xoxo
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Dear Roy,
I was just praying for the saints of God; to bind us together in grace and love in the end times as never before. We need Him and one another. A beautiful, encouraging poem of our deep faith in Christ.
Blessings to you and yours,
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Your muse is a blessing for all of us as you write a poem each day, reminding us of what road we are expected to travel. I pray for the United States and its people to gather with open hearts and find peace and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
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Your muse is a blessing for all of us as you write a poem each day, reminding us of what road we are expected to travel. I pray for the United States and its people to gather with open hearts and find peace and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
Lovely rhyming and a tribute to your faith. Thanks for sharing once again Roy and thanks for the notes. there is always a positive message in your poems.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Lovely rhyming and a tribute to your faith. Thanks for sharing once again Roy and thanks for the notes. there is always a positive message in your poems.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Since you mention your muse in the beginning, I'm assuming the poem addresses the fact that you have been called by God to spread His word through your poetry. He's also given you the skill to deliver His message. Because in Christ you "now have worth."
Your muse never rests, Roy!
xo
Pam
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Since you mention your muse in the beginning, I'm assuming the poem addresses the fact that you have been called by God to spread His word through your poetry. He's also given you the skill to deliver His message. Because in Christ you "now have worth."
Your muse never rests, Roy!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a heartfelt and humble prayer that resonates with me, and I believe with many who see Jesus Christ as their Lord and life's inspiration.
America certainly needs to come together in prayer, but even more so, in a deliberate, but peaceful acknowledgement of God.
Well done
RJ
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This is a heartfelt and humble prayer that resonates with me, and I believe with many who see Jesus Christ as their Lord and life's inspiration.
America certainly needs to come together in prayer, but even more so, in a deliberate, but peaceful acknowledgement of God.
Well done
RJ
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
The more of your poetry I read, the more I see how blessed you are to capture the grace and mercy He gives you in your words.
This poem is a great example of your talent and i thank you for sharing it.
Tim.
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The more of your poetry I read, the more I see how blessed you are to capture the grace and mercy He gives you in your words.
This poem is a great example of your talent and i thank you for sharing it.
Tim.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Wendy G
I found the second last line impossible to understand. Did you mean "I thank our Father ..."? Also, I would suggest line 4 reads "Because He cleansed me, made me whole" as that would be better for the metre and flow. But of course, it's your poem - this is a suggestion only.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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I found the second last line impossible to understand. Did you mean "I thank our Father ..."? Also, I would suggest line 4 reads "Because He cleansed me, made me whole" as that would be better for the metre and flow. But of course, it's your poem - this is a suggestion only.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks Wendy, I wrote this in haste and a little careless, I thank you for graciousness and attention. Thanks so much, blessings Roy