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Don't depend on rumour.

A poem

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Comment from CM Pickard
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A beautifully reflective poem. You've got the right balance between making the reader think beyond the emotive reaction to logic. I also love how you wove the obvious with something deeper in the last stanza.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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Wonderful poem, Roy! I think your poem is perfect for our divisive times where our country is in the middle of an election and there is so much mudslinging! I especially liked your conclusion:
"So think with grace about both sides,
one, where grace and kindness rides,
and two where thought and logic bides."

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thanks Helen, for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is sound advice, Roy, especially since we have a big election here in 5 days. There have been so many rumors, lies, and innuendos with this election in particular. I pray that people will think before they vote. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thanks Carol, for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Roy
Wise words, too often we tend to have strong opinions and it is difficult to change but at times we need to sit and listen to others opinions
Your poem suns it up nicely
Cheers Chrisxx

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thanks Chris, for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Esther Brown
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I always enjoy your posts. I like "Truth and logic should join and be a thought that doesn't leak". Leaky thoughts. Old wives tales? Where did you grow up? I imagined you as a pastor's kid.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thanks Esther, for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from DonandVicki
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An excellent phylosophical poem, I like the statement by albert Schweitzer. that the wise person thinks for him or her self. Do not judge the intire book by its cover.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thanks D&V, for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from jim vecchio
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When I was a Program Coordinator for adults with challenges, our agency had a sheltered workshop for those individuals who worked with supervision indoors. One of the supervisors there was someone I had suspected for a long time couldn't stand me. She had a daughter working there. She left her job but before she left she went over to me and asked me to take her daughter on my casefile. She told me, "You're the only one I know I can trust." I learned not to go by feelings after that.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thanks Jim, you're a good man, and thanks for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from ESOSTINE
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I cannot agree less. Our views are often functions of the information available to us, or the position on which we stand. And this might not be the truth, or the right views or position. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, dear Roy. Well done.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thanks, for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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Hi Roy, I enjoyed your poem. I think no matters who wins the election, we are going to have problems. God is the only one who can fix this world.
Poem is well written.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thanks Brenda, for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from patcelaw
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It is important for us all to think through a situation before we open our mouth and convince everybody that we are so wrong. I wish you the very best with your writing. Also, wish you a wonderful weekend and may God bless you.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
    Thanks Pat, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy