The Crazy Bee Lady
a new beginning6 total reviews
Comment from Senyai
Hi, Gansach,
I love this Flash Fiction you've made. Your story is an excellent beginning to a longer writing or the beginning chapter to a little book... You have piqued my interest and I want to know more about the little girl who crept into the garden of the "mean" bee lady, the lady who adores bees. She is fascinating, coddling a wounded bee by surrounding the tiny creature with flower petals and a drop of homemade nectar!
Love it!
Senyai
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Hi, Gansach,
I love this Flash Fiction you've made. Your story is an excellent beginning to a longer writing or the beginning chapter to a little book... You have piqued my interest and I want to know more about the little girl who crept into the garden of the "mean" bee lady, the lady who adores bees. She is fascinating, coddling a wounded bee by surrounding the tiny creature with flower petals and a drop of homemade nectar!
Love it!
Senyai
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review. I appreciate your comments. It might become a short children's story some day if I can find the rest of the story in my brain. Thanks again!
Comment from Wendy G
A fine story, informative as well as interesting. Sounds like it was based on experience. She certainly was more preoccupied with the bee's well-being with the child's. A fine conclusion! Best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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A fine story, informative as well as interesting. Sounds like it was based on experience. She certainly was more preoccupied with the bee's well-being with the child's. A fine conclusion! Best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a delightful read! I love how you captured the tension with the stinging bee and the surprise of meeting the Crazy Bee Lady. You did a great job of bringing her garden to life. I also appreciated the lesson in the story including the importance of bees. This is such a charming tale! It leaves me with a smile! Keep up the fantastic work!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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What a delightful read! I love how you captured the tension with the stinging bee and the surprise of meeting the Crazy Bee Lady. You did a great job of bringing her garden to life. I also appreciated the lesson in the story including the importance of bees. This is such a charming tale! It leaves me with a smile! Keep up the fantastic work!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much! I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Comment from Kahlani
Ouch! I have only been stung once by a bee when I was ten years old and I quickly learned to avoid them. Your story took me back to that painful time. Well done on an entertaining piece.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Ouch! I have only been stung once by a bee when I was ten years old and I quickly learned to avoid them. Your story took me back to that painful time. Well done on an entertaining piece.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from bob cullen
This is so delightful. And informative. Information such as this teaches the importance of nature and also lessens the unnecessary fear factor of bee sting. Children taught with love learn so much more than those threatened with punishment. As I said at the beginning, delightful.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This is so delightful. And informative. Information such as this teaches the importance of nature and also lessens the unnecessary fear factor of bee sting. Children taught with love learn so much more than those threatened with punishment. As I said at the beginning, delightful.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much! I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am glad this story didn't end in disaster and it was a relief to have a happy ending as the last few posts I have read have been horror stories. I enjoyed this inventive and warm hearted post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I am glad this story didn't end in disaster and it was a relief to have a happy ending as the last few posts I have read have been horror stories. I enjoyed this inventive and warm hearted post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much! I am so glad you liked it. Bees are very close to my heart.