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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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The other night I looked outside and saw the most beautiful full moon, I'd ever seen. I went out on the sidewalk, in my nightgown, to get a better view of it. It was breathtaking. My husband was pretty sure, I'd lost my stuff. I guess men don't understand, or at least this one. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

I congratulate your club contest for this poem genre.

Yours and others are really good.

Your text and coloring for your post is most effective IMHO.

We should all emulate in our lives your conclusion!

Mark

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Ahhh! What a beautiful rendition of this week's assignment by the masterful poet, herself!! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! I couldn't love it more. Thank you, also, for having chosen such a lovely picture for us to use this week. It make the presentation so much more glorious!! xoxo

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I like this format of writing.
Its descriptive and very expressive style. I hope to try it myself. Beautiful way of composing verse. Thank you for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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hmm didn't even think of the blood moon lol!

a great description of the pic - and cool second pic, too
nice imagery and inner meaning and smooth flow of words

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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And this too is another joyful celebration of a proud and distinguished people standing tall against the glorious backdrop of nature and its stunning red moon. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Well, I love the image and thanks to your notes I now understand more about this form of Japenese poetry. You accomplished the requirements very well. Thanks for sharing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from zanya
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Both Color and sound engage the reader from the outset in this QIYAN JUEJU poem( not familiar with this format)- love the simplicity, nay minimalism of expression.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy