French Kiss
One of life*s shared pleasures.2 total reviews
Comment from docsoc
A well thought out and cleverly executed poem. You draw the reader in. The build up to the kiss is loving and sensual. You know where you're going with this. I like your choice of words as you lead in to the climax.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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A well thought out and cleverly executed poem. You draw the reader in. The build up to the kiss is loving and sensual. You know where you're going with this. I like your choice of words as you lead in to the climax.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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So very kind. Much appreciated.
Comment from DonandVicki
I can remember my first French kiss, those kisses are hard to forget. A you said; "One of life's shared pleasures." I couldn't have said it better. Well written.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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I can remember my first French kiss, those kisses are hard to forget. A you said; "One of life's shared pleasures." I couldn't have said it better. Well written.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Many thanks.