Comment from Kahlani

Excellent

I was just about to ask you where Rogersville was. That was until the sprites came along and ruined everything. Everybody seemed so happy. What has become of Rogersville now!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Thanks for having fun with my story. Let's just say its not such a beautiful day in the neighborhood anymore.

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

That was well written with a sense of humor. What an intrusion into a perfect world! I particularly like the reaction of the women as they rebelled against their enslaved lives. Very imaginative and enjoyable! Evi

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024

Thanks it was a blast to write a silly tale.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a fun fantasy. The village of Rogersville is so perfect and then boom! The sprites change everything. Your tale is well written and flows smoothly, creating clear scenes. Excellent Halloween tale and best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024

It was super fun to write. Thanks for the good wishes.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

One little bit of selfishness is all it takes to turn our hearts away from happiness. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024

Thanks mike. I had fun writing it.