His Silence
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This was a good chapter in that we learn Eve's story and wonder if her parents were so bad or if Oliver has totally brainwashed her into believing she needs no one from her past.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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This was a good chapter in that we learn Eve's story and wonder if her parents were so bad or if Oliver has totally brainwashed her into believing she needs no one from her past.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Than you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So Oliver makes sure nobody has any contact with the outside world. It is very much a controlled environment and a commune. I really wish Danielle and Callum would get out of there while they still can. I am worried about their safety.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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So Oliver makes sure nobody has any contact with the outside world. It is very much a controlled environment and a commune. I really wish Danielle and Callum would get out of there while they still can. I am worried about their safety.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Creepier and creepier! Definitely a sect with a charismatic leader and a monopoly on the truth (as Google defines). What was he doing out in the night preying on young homeless people? Danielle is piecing all this together with clarity. She's a smart young woman (not so sure about Callum though). Some edits: and these boy(s) came up to me (no apostrophe); Mary will be able to find us something (else) to do.
This is an excellent, lucidly expressed story in which the answers are still unclear but the truth is beginning slowly to emerge. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Creepier and creepier! Definitely a sect with a charismatic leader and a monopoly on the truth (as Google defines). What was he doing out in the night preying on young homeless people? Danielle is piecing all this together with clarity. She's a smart young woman (not so sure about Callum though). Some edits: and these boy(s) came up to me (no apostrophe); Mary will be able to find us something (else) to do.
This is an excellent, lucidly expressed story in which the answers are still unclear but the truth is beginning slowly to emerge. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Definitely not a good sign, Jacob. Cutting people off from their friends and family is always a red flag thing. It's typical of cults that want to control their members. Good insight into the cult mindset.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Definitely not a good sign, Jacob. Cutting people off from their friends and family is always a red flag thing. It's typical of cults that want to control their members. Good insight into the cult mindset.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thank you Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
I can't understand where these people are getting the money to support everyone. It seems no one has a job, and so far they haven't asked for money. I would think she would have gotten more answers by now. I can't imagine Callum being willing to stay unless he might be falling for Eve. I look forward to reading you posts.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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I can't understand where these people are getting the money to support everyone. It seems no one has a job, and so far they haven't asked for money. I would think she would have gotten more answers by now. I can't imagine Callum being willing to stay unless he might be falling for Eve. I look forward to reading you posts.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Beth, I'm glad that you're still enjoying it.
Comment from royowen
A sad story about Eve, I don't know how parents can withdraw their support of their kids, Oliver comes along and saves her from a bunch of thuggish drunken or drugged youths, mocking and suggestively approaching her, beautifully written, blessings Jacob, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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A sad story about Eve, I don't know how parents can withdraw their support of their kids, Oliver comes along and saves her from a bunch of thuggish drunken or drugged youths, mocking and suggestively approaching her, beautifully written, blessings Jacob, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Roy, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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Well done
Comment from Begin Again
And now she learns that once here no one goes away...either by their choice or something else. It sounds like it might have been the best alternative for Eve, but it certainly limits her life. Well told chapter, Jacob.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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And now she learns that once here no one goes away...either by their choice or something else. It sounds like it might have been the best alternative for Eve, but it certainly limits her life. Well told chapter, Jacob.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.