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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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In the novel, I'm writing to post after Sami and Noah's story, the heroine, Rebeka often searches the stars to get answers. Thank you for sharing this complete presentation with us. We're honored you share your talent here.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    That sounds like a wonderful new book. Thank you very much,

    Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This is another warm and comforting poem with a touch of whimsy. It is playful and makes me think of a child's imagination as they are tucked in bed looking up at the night sky through their window. Beautiful. Gretchen

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Gretchen

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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A lovely thought to count the stars with the moon. That sounds much better than counting sheep! It's going to be a supermoon soon! Thanks for the lovely poem and picture.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you have a wonderful day 😊 💗 💛

    Marival ❤️ 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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love the gold on black - way cool!
a great gogyhoka wishing on the moon goddess to twinkle some stars...

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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This reminds of a story I read as a child. Both moon and stars played on my bed sweet was its theme. Your work is always well presented, and this one resonantes with a childhood memory.
RJ

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from royowen
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Well done a beautifully written ode to these small ones that we have been blessed with that gives us that impetus to nurture and sow good seed into their young lives, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊

    Gypsy
reply by royowen on 15-Oct-2024
    Pleasure
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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A soothing, hypnotic verse, beautifully presented, inviting the moon goddess to share her playful charms as the narrator prepares for sleep. Thank you for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊

    Gypsy