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guns kill in 1-6-1 lines2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done. I like how you start with "lie" and end with "die". I think it does a great job of emphasizing your message. Great job in sharing such a powerful message in such a tight format. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Nicely done. I like how you start with "lie" and end with "die". I think it does a great job of emphasizing your message. Great job in sharing such a powerful message in such a tight format. Keep writing!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thanks
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem is rich in meaning, and meets the 1-6-1 contest entry. Even the those who shoot to kill, are also killed by the gun though they champion the freedom to bear arms. Well done, dear. And good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Your poem is rich in meaning, and meets the 1-6-1 contest entry. Even the those who shoot to kill, are also killed by the gun though they champion the freedom to bear arms. Well done, dear. And good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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thanks a lot