The Lighthouse
Beauty in the distance against the evening sky7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, The Lighthouse, has the proper formatting and recognizes the building and its life and death significance for the area there and all those who passed safely to other places.
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This 5-7-5, The Lighthouse, has the proper formatting and recognizes the building and its life and death significance for the area there and all those who passed safely to other places.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
Comment from Kahlani
This is a very serene and moving poem, even though it only has 17 syllables--a remarkable feat for a poem where conciseness is essential to getting the message across.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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This is a very serene and moving poem, even though it only has 17 syllables--a remarkable feat for a poem where conciseness is essential to getting the message across.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from jessizero
I liked this 5-7-5 for the writing prompt. It looks like you got the syllable counts right for the contest. Your poem was a lovely description of a lighthouse. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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I liked this 5-7-5 for the writing prompt. It looks like you got the syllable counts right for the contest. Your poem was a lovely description of a lighthouse. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
Yes, indeed, what would the sailors do without these fabulous warning devices such as these proudly built and with their life saving capacity to guard the shoreline of those men that go down to the seas in ship, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Yes, indeed, what would the sailors do without these fabulous warning devices such as these proudly built and with their life saving capacity to guard the shoreline of those men that go down to the seas in ship, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
Good syllable count and I like the internal rhyme; sand and stands, end rhymes: sea and proudly. Very nicely written and your stunning lighthouse photo to enhance your poem.
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Good syllable count and I like the internal rhyme; sand and stands, end rhymes: sea and proudly. Very nicely written and your stunning lighthouse photo to enhance your poem.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
Comment from Amelie Johns
This is a lovely 5.7.5 poem. I'm a big fan of the sea! I always feel a sense of calm by the sea.Very nice artwork to accompany your poem. A lighthouse is a symbol of strength and safety. We all need a lighthouse in our lives.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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This is a lovely 5.7.5 poem. I'm a big fan of the sea! I always feel a sense of calm by the sea.Very nice artwork to accompany your poem. A lighthouse is a symbol of strength and safety. We all need a lighthouse in our lives.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your beautiful words
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The picture is beautiful and this prompted you to write this poignant poem about that guiding light from the lighthouse. They are mostly extinct now and I enjoyed your vivid memory of them here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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The picture is beautiful and this prompted you to write this poignant poem about that guiding light from the lighthouse. They are mostly extinct now and I enjoyed your vivid memory of them here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!