Comment from
shad blunt
Love all the styles of Japanese writing. Love the poem and keep looking up to the sky for wisdom to write the lyrics of thoughts to flow. Look at tanka style of writing. 57577 tell a story in 31 sylables in nature why it is happening
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
I love to try my hand at all types of writing and thus increase my experience, as well.
Comment from
Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, God's Land Set in Stone, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that God has a people which hold Him up and are protected from attacks being overwhelming.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
Thanks. I felt I had to write something after the aerial assault.