2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Plain Front Porch, has the proper formatting and creates the spectacular scene of the common area made brilliant by the mystical and fluttering fireflies.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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This haiku, Plain Front Porch, has the proper formatting and creates the spectacular scene of the common area made brilliant by the mystical and fluttering fireflies.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
I haven't ever seen real fireflies. I guess it depends on where you live. But I like the fact that Nature decorates much more fabulously than anything that we can buy.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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I haven't ever seen real fireflies. I guess it depends on where you live. But I like the fact that Nature decorates much more fabulously than anything that we can buy.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister ❤️
Marival 😊 ❤️
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a lovely thought of nature providing her own porchlights ... especially ones so entertaining! ;) :) Beautiful imagery in both pen and presentation, my lady -- thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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What a lovely thought of nature providing her own porchlights ... especially ones so entertaining! ;) :) Beautiful imagery in both pen and presentation, my lady -- thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Yvette. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Yes, a plain front door would look perfect decorated with fireflies. I know it would and visualize it. I enjoyed your talent, again.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Yes, a plain front door would look perfect decorated with fireflies. I know it would and visualize it. I enjoyed your talent, again.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara,
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Often times back in Trinidad, I would sit with my girlfriend her porch. It was a plain porch, but on very dark nights the fireflies made the porch come alive. We called them candleflies back then. Your poem is very relatable, and also reminds me how sometimes in life, seemingly plain things can attract the beauty in others.
RJ
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Often times back in Trinidad, I would sit with my girlfriend her porch. It was a plain porch, but on very dark nights the fireflies made the porch come alive. We called them candleflies back then. Your poem is very relatable, and also reminds me how sometimes in life, seemingly plain things can attract the beauty in others.
RJ
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
cool - like the juxtaposition between plain and fancy as fireflies light up the porch...
the top pic is way cool, too
a great haiku with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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cool - like the juxtaposition between plain and fancy as fireflies light up the porch...
the top pic is way cool, too
a great haiku with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written Modern Haiku. You used great descriptive and colorful words. Very lovely imagery also. Thank you for sharing and teaching us! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written Modern Haiku. You used great descriptive and colorful words. Very lovely imagery also. Thank you for sharing and teaching us! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy 😊