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Vampire 5-7-5 contest entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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You've captured the expression on her face beautifully! And, yes, he really thought he had the perfect chat-up line. But she had the final retort. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Debbie. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Yeah, they're always promising something, aren't they?? :-) A good entry for the 5-7-5 vampiric contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :-)

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Well hey, Yvette. How long have you been back? That's awesome.

    Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silliness.

    Glad to see you're back.
reply by Y. M. Roger on 26-Sep-2024
    Just back recently... new place, new life... still the same ol' me! So good to connect again -- good to hear from you!! ;) Yvette
Comment from jessizero
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This vampire 5-7-5 was definitely a creative take on the prompt. I loved the response to the vampire's offer! You also got the syllable counts right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Jessi. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Some chicks in bars can just be freakin ingrates, can't they?! What gives with that?

I love this entry, and I'm betting LOTS of members will. I fully expect to see this one in the Winner's Circle, Mystery Poet! Good luck to you. xoxo

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Lol. I was just in one of those moods again. Who could pass up a vampire 5-7-5 when a couple shots in after work? Haha. Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Rachelle. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 25-Sep-2024
    No one in his WRITE mind could!! Haaa! I bet you just love what I did there!! xoxox
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Hahaha. Yes I did.

    ;)