His Silence
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
The plot thickens, as the saying goes. I love the diary aspect and the bit about calling Danielle, Bean. I wonder what happened to the name, Sarah.
Oliver is beyond creepy, he's now bordering on dangerous. The mystery is deepening, my friend,
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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The plot thickens, as the saying goes. I love the diary aspect and the bit about calling Danielle, Bean. I wonder what happened to the name, Sarah.
Oliver is beyond creepy, he's now bordering on dangerous. The mystery is deepening, my friend,
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Thank you Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Did I miss something before, or will I need to read further to know why The Lion, The Witch, and the Wardrobe would be so frightening to her? It is good she is talking to Callum, but I wonder how long she will be able to do this. Good writing to make the reader think and worry about Dani.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Did I miss something before, or will I need to read further to know why The Lion, The Witch, and the Wardrobe would be so frightening to her? It is good she is talking to Callum, but I wonder how long she will be able to do this. Good writing to make the reader think and worry about Dani.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well done, Jacob, for keeping this really creepy, foreboding ambience going. I was thinking that, perhaps, she'd been drugged but, whatever the case, Oliver certainly has some, seemingly, sinister power over her. Thanks for sharing this excellent chapter. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Well done, Jacob, for keeping this really creepy, foreboding ambience going. I was thinking that, perhaps, she'd been drugged but, whatever the case, Oliver certainly has some, seemingly, sinister power over her. Thanks for sharing this excellent chapter. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
So...Danielle has a history of some panic attacks. Luckily Callum is there for her to touch base with. The diary sounds promising, or at least reassuring so far. The only suggestion I had was with this sentence:
Now I've said I've a feeling bean's going to be a girl,
I kind of think I would capitalize Bean.
On to more chapters!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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So...Danielle has a history of some panic attacks. Luckily Callum is there for her to touch base with. The diary sounds promising, or at least reassuring so far. The only suggestion I had was with this sentence:
Now I've said I've a feeling bean's going to be a girl,
I kind of think I would capitalize Bean.
On to more chapters!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Amelie Johns
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Chapter. I admit I have not read the prior Chapters but I am certainly intrigued to know what happened before this moment and especially what is to come. I like your style and the story. This will make for a very exciting book.
Amelie
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Chapter. I admit I have not read the prior Chapters but I am certainly intrigued to know what happened before this moment and especially what is to come. I like your style and the story. This will make for a very exciting book.
Amelie
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you Amelie, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm glad Oliver isn't keeping her from seeing Callum. Oliver isn't stopping her from using the internet although he seems to hesitate about it. These people seem to be trying to make everything seem normal like they aren't trying to hind things but she not getting the answers she needs. I anxious to know if the diary will reveal anything.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I'm glad Oliver isn't keeping her from seeing Callum. Oliver isn't stopping her from using the internet although he seems to hesitate about it. These people seem to be trying to make everything seem normal like they aren't trying to hind things but she not getting the answers she needs. I anxious to know if the diary will reveal anything.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Hmm..Did Danielle's mother have something going on with Oliver. Id that why they've brought her back? Is she possibly his daughter? Lots of questions. I wonder if she will share any of hers with Callum. I hope so.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Hmm..Did Danielle's mother have something going on with Oliver. Id that why they've brought her back? Is she possibly his daughter? Lots of questions. I wonder if she will share any of hers with Callum. I hope so.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad Callum is there for Danielle to talk this over with. I am wondering why her mom was so worried about telling Oliver she was pregnant. I have so many questions. I like this story.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I'm glad Callum is there for Danielle to talk this over with. I am wondering why her mom was so worried about telling Oliver she was pregnant. I have so many questions. I like this story.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.