Willing Hearts
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12 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I'm sure in my advanced thinking Sami and Noah will be married, and probably in yours too. But they will have work out their ground rules too, otherwise their relationship may end in divorce that's why. But they seem to be working them out, well done, Barbara, blessings Roy
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I'm sure in my advanced thinking Sami and Noah will be married, and probably in yours too. But they will have work out their ground rules too, otherwise their relationship may end in divorce that's why. But they seem to be working them out, well done, Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
As usual, I loved your work! Reading it in installments, with time passing, everything is perfect. But, I'm wondering, in book format, or thinking in movie format, almost every installment speaks about eating or refers to dinner. (Not so much this one). In collected format, maybe you can vary the scenes or dialogue a bit more. I'm not complaining. I guess I'm hungry now
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As usual, I loved your work! Reading it in installments, with time passing, everything is perfect. But, I'm wondering, in book format, or thinking in movie format, almost every installment speaks about eating or refers to dinner. (Not so much this one). In collected format, maybe you can vary the scenes or dialogue a bit more. I'm not complaining. I guess I'm hungry now
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
Comment from Teri7
I am so glad that I have six stars to give you for this great chapter. I wish these chapters never had to end and could keep on going. Maybe a second book would be great! I can always dream! love and blessings, Teri
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I am so glad that I have six stars to give you for this great chapter. I wish these chapters never had to end and could keep on going. Maybe a second book would be great! I can always dream! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
Comment from judiverse
I think Sami's getting a bit ahead of herself. She's talking about marriage and children and Noah hasn't made his intentions clear. She's already made things complicated enough. I suppose we couldn't have a story without complications, though. The conversation with Mateo was handled well. Maybe when Chen is caught and Sami is no longer in protective custody, maybe she can think more clearly. Maybe she has a case of Stockholm syndrome, where prisoners become attached to their captors. Oh, I'd better stop with the analyzing. You know her better than I do. judi
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I think Sami's getting a bit ahead of herself. She's talking about marriage and children and Noah hasn't made his intentions clear. She's already made things complicated enough. I suppose we couldn't have a story without complications, though. The conversation with Mateo was handled well. Maybe when Chen is caught and Sami is no longer in protective custody, maybe she can think more clearly. Maybe she has a case of Stockholm syndrome, where prisoners become attached to their captors. Oh, I'd better stop with the analyzing. You know her better than I do. judi
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
Comment from lancellot
This is a well written chapter and we good a really clear view of how far the relationship between your two leads has progressed. The conversation is sweet and very female friendly, as Noah defers to Sami's feelings and wants easily and kindly, with gentle compromise and understand. The perfect gentleman.
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This is a well written chapter and we good a really clear view of how far the relationship between your two leads has progressed. The conversation is sweet and very female friendly, as Noah defers to Sami's feelings and wants easily and kindly, with gentle compromise and understand. The perfect gentleman.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
Comment from GWHARGIS
I am enjoying the openness of their relationship now. Sami loves him and she isn't trying to hide it, but she understands that Noah has to remain professional. This is getting more and more interesting. But I have that feeling that the other shoe is about to drop. Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I am enjoying the openness of their relationship now. Sami loves him and she isn't trying to hide it, but she understands that Noah has to remain professional. This is getting more and more interesting. But I have that feeling that the other shoe is about to drop. Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Yes, the shoe is about to drop. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
I love that the growing relationship between Sami and Noah is out in the open and a matter of speculation and conversation. Sami's open affection for Noah is very refreshing, wholesome and encouraging. I love it. I love that she openly displayed it for Mateo to see and digest, even though he continues to flirt with her.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I love that the growing relationship between Sami and Noah is out in the open and a matter of speculation and conversation. Sami's open affection for Noah is very refreshing, wholesome and encouraging. I love it. I love that she openly displayed it for Mateo to see and digest, even though he continues to flirt with her.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Mateo will never give up. LOL Thank you for the kind review. Sending hugs and prayers.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, as always, this was a great chapter. The dialogue is crisp and to the point . But what is more. I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hi Barbara, as always, this was a great chapter. The dialogue is crisp and to the point . But what is more. I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Yes, bad things are about to happen. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
At a point where the bonds are quickly getting thicker, I'm guessing that something big is about to happen. But with me, I'm just the type who is always anticipating something. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
"That would be (a) problem, wouldn't it?"
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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At a point where the bonds are quickly getting thicker, I'm guessing that something big is about to happen. But with me, I'm just the type who is always anticipating something. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
"That would be (a) problem, wouldn't it?"
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I've made the correction. Yes, something big is about to happen. I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
(Your) English is excellent.
Sami is showing her strong character and I like this. She's been locked up for too long and she's bound to be frustrated by all the machismo going on. Great ending. Thanks for sharing, Barbara. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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(Your) English is excellent.
Sami is showing her strong character and I like this. She's been locked up for too long and she's bound to be frustrated by all the machismo going on. Great ending. Thanks for sharing, Barbara. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
