Babe
child's rhyming poem5 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sparkling post for children with the mention of a few childhood stories to add magic to this poem, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a joy to read, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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A sparkling post for children with the mention of a few childhood stories to add magic to this poem, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a joy to read, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thnk you so much for those kind words.
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
I was very impressed by your rhyming poetry that left me captivated til the last verse, i hope you win the contest :)
Take care,
Warmest regards,
Sarah
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I was very impressed by your rhyming poetry that left me captivated til the last verse, i hope you win the contest :)
Take care,
Warmest regards,
Sarah
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Sarah, for such kindness.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Jim,
This is such a heartwarming children's poem.
You tell your story from your point of view, as the child sleeps.
Fantastic poem, Jim.
Best wishes,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Jim,
This is such a heartwarming children's poem.
You tell your story from your point of view, as the child sleeps.
Fantastic poem, Jim.
Best wishes,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Cindy.
Comment from Begin Again
Oh, perfect for a little one... thoughts of lullaby characters to see in their dreams. And yes, they do grow up far too fast. Thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Oh, perfect for a little one... thoughts of lullaby characters to see in their dreams. And yes, they do grow up far too fast. Thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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My body sure aged, but my mind must've stopped at a young age.
Comment from Writeup Master
Great start to the thought of childhood wonder however I can't help but to get depressed as I read down the lines.
Shall a baby think of his soon to end wonders and dreams?
Shall the baby think of how the fair will while trying to go to sleep?
Maybe it's from an adults point view, we might need them little monsters to rate this piece themselves.
Regardless, the font and background colour do wonders for the mood you set.
Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Great start to the thought of childhood wonder however I can't help but to get depressed as I read down the lines.
Shall a baby think of his soon to end wonders and dreams?
Shall the baby think of how the fair will while trying to go to sleep?
Maybe it's from an adults point view, we might need them little monsters to rate this piece themselves.
Regardless, the font and background colour do wonders for the mood you set.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I thought of those reservations myself. I was thinking of the song "Puff The Magic Dragon".
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Oh... I haven't heard of it. I'll give it a listen then.
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If you hear it, I'd like your take on it. Some say it is a song glorifying drugs, but I believe Peter, Paul and Mary disputed that. it is now considered a children's song.
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Yeah, gave it a listen. Beautiful tune & effortless melody. My take.... It genuinely sounds like a children song. Whether or not some little adult-relatable content was mixed there to get some attention or not is very debatable. There are many instances where a sentence can have various meanings, of which were never the intention of the artist or speaker.
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You are so correct. Many comedians have made their lives due to their "double-entendres".