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An AI revolution.3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
Ooo! I would love to read this story. Is it a horror story? A redemption story? An odyssey story? A love story? A fish out of water story? The possibilities are endless. And I'd still read it.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Ooo! I would love to read this story. Is it a horror story? A redemption story? An odyssey story? A love story? A fish out of water story? The possibilities are endless. And I'd still read it.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thanks again for the honor.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this is an interesting Terminator scene, but just so know, it has been overdone. Now, that aside. I would change the final line, as that question has clearly been answered for the reader and Jason, unless he's an idiot.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Hmm, this is an interesting Terminator scene, but just so know, it has been overdone. Now, that aside. I would change the final line, as that question has clearly been answered for the reader and Jason, unless he's an idiot.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thanks for the read and suggestion. I will consider it. Although, I'm not sure everyone believes it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is such a suspenseful scene! I love how you build up the tension with Jason's frantic attempts to stop the machine. Couldn't believe when it generated its own power. The question you leave us with really sticks. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This is such a suspenseful scene! I love how you build up the tension with Jason's frantic attempts to stop the machine. Couldn't believe when it generated its own power. The question you leave us with really sticks. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the feedback. Much appreciated.