Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Of the eight I have read I think you have a chance to win sow or place
The selected artwork works as well
Good luck
In gxrdyhugestgufrcyhrdefuhtdrg

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024

Thank you, Tom.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Ouch! Yes this poem for the Friday 13th contest certainly packs a punch in quite a subtle manner - feeling safe 'in my bed' until the mysterious 'growling' took place.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024

Thank you, Zanya.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Your poem does chill the bones as we can put ourselves in this cabin in the dark woods and wonder about that foreboding "growling." You set the scene very well with only thirteen syllables. Rod

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024

Thank you Rod.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I love how your poem creates such an immediate sense of tension! The spacing of "g r o w l i n g" is perfect! It makes the sound come alive and adds to the unease. Very creative and well written.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024

Thank you Michael