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Comment from Patrick Bernardy
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Hello!

This is disgusting! *laughs* But you still fulfilled the prompt! Good luck!

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Patrick

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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With the picture, it really is a horror poem, I guess. I didn't even remember that it was Friday the 13th. Anyway, without the picture, I think I would think of a child happy to present a first dessert made all by herself.
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Well it's horrific, that's for sure lol good entry for the prompt.

"Words can kill ... if you're doing it right."

This review is sponsored by 'The Little Workshop of Horrors' Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

Comment from Bill Schott
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This thirteen-syllable poem, Dessert, has the proper syllable count and lends to the notion that the chocolate might taste like crap for an obvious reason. Chucky Pucky.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

Comment from Begin Again
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Well, there went any thoughts I might have had of eating lunch. LOL His face alone is enough to send chills, but the thought of what the dessert might hold, eliminates my love of chocolate.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024