Hurt Me No More!
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Comment from jake cosmos aller
another great entry for the Friday the 13th contest I like the image chosen and I like the flow and words chosen, very well done horror poem in 13 syabellls
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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another great entry for the Friday the 13th contest I like the image chosen and I like the flow and words chosen, very well done horror poem in 13 syabellls
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Jake. It was definitely out of my genre but I gave it a shot. Have a great day!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This was a curious challenge and you did as well as anyone
I think a bolder red font would enhance the entry
Best wishes
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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This was a curious challenge and you did as well as anyone
I think a bolder red font would enhance the entry
Best wishes
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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One of these days I will learn to stop entering these blind contests. No one ever reads the story and I feel so bad when I write and get nothing back in return. Thanks so much Tom.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
That's one way to release pain. Pick up a sharp dagger in the night and seal your bloody actions with a kiss. This black and red presentation is appropriately creepy and perfect for Friday the 13th. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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That's one way to release pain. Pick up a sharp dagger in the night and seal your bloody actions with a kiss. This black and red presentation is appropriately creepy and perfect for Friday the 13th. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Actually, this creepy stuff is far from my genre and I think once was enough. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Have a great day@
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This piece has such raw intensity. The words like "rip" and "drip" share such violence. The word "Kiss!" was so unexpected and didn't seem to fit. Until you read on... I can sense the pain and desire for relief in your words. Very powerful and well written!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This piece has such raw intensity. The words like "rip" and "drip" share such violence. The word "Kiss!" was so unexpected and didn't seem to fit. Until you read on... I can sense the pain and desire for relief in your words. Very powerful and well written!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I'm no tne to write poetry or get into the horror genre but I was asked and I tried. I appreciate your kindness and the review. Have a great day!
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
Hello!
Very good interpretation of the prompt! The only thing I would suggest is to make your text a couple sizes bigger. The font and color combos are perfect, but my old eyes have to squint to read it. *laughs* Oh, and tell your son that I am glad he compelled you to write this! Speaking of being out of your realm, those of us who like to write a little in the darkness are nice, welcoming people. You have nothing to fear from us ... it's just our writing that's supposed to scare you. Good luck in the contest!
Words can kill ... if you're doing it right. This review is sponsored by "The Little Workshop of Horrors" Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!"
Patrick
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hello!
Very good interpretation of the prompt! The only thing I would suggest is to make your text a couple sizes bigger. The font and color combos are perfect, but my old eyes have to squint to read it. *laughs* Oh, and tell your son that I am glad he compelled you to write this! Speaking of being out of your realm, those of us who like to write a little in the darkness are nice, welcoming people. You have nothing to fear from us ... it's just our writing that's supposed to scare you. Good luck in the contest!
Words can kill ... if you're doing it right. This review is sponsored by "The Little Workshop of Horrors" Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!"
Patrick
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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With all your kindness, I could never think you were anything but nice, welcoming people. I have no fear.
I was posted at Font 22 and I did increase it to 28...I thought I was the only blind one. LOL
I thank you for your review and wish you well with the club.
Have a great day!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I like this poem, especially the way you formatted the words on the page. and the colors used. A good entry for the prompt!
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"Words can kill ... if you're doing it right."
This review is sponsored by 'The Little Workshop of Horrors' Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I like this poem, especially the way you formatted the words on the page. and the colors used. A good entry for the prompt!
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"Words can kill ... if you're doing it right."
This review is sponsored by 'The Little Workshop of Horrors' Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Marilyn. It was a fun write and I hope others enjoy it. I wish the Club well with their efforts.
Have a great day!
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirteen-syllable poem, Hurt Me No More, has the proper syllable count and seems to witness a murder/suicide with the knife providing the desired and undesired ends.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This thirteen-syllable poem, Hurt Me No More, has the proper syllable count and seems to witness a murder/suicide with the knife providing the desired and undesired ends.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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totally out of my wheelhouse, that's for sure. But I'm told we must cross the line now and then...for me I will tip toe along the edge and hope that it's enough. Thank you for the review.
Have a great day!
Comment from papa55mike
A lot of those poems will be posted today. It's amazing how this day affects people. What a wonderfully written poem--very sinister. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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A lot of those poems will be posted today. It's amazing how this day affects people. What a wonderfully written poem--very sinister. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Mike. It was totally out of my wheelhouse, but what the heck...we have walk a different line once and a while I guess. I appreciate the review and best wishes. Have a great day!
