Here's The Plan!
Max needs a new home26 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
That was sweet and clever. Sneaky, but inventive too. When kids are fearful a pet gives them someone to talk to and hug and kiss.
I am allergic, and I got to tell you turtles were n o substitute.
:-)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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That was sweet and clever. Sneaky, but inventive too. When kids are fearful a pet gives them someone to talk to and hug and kiss.
I am allergic, and I got to tell you turtles were n o substitute.
:-)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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I would have been loss without my dog during childhood and even today. I don't recall a time I didn't have one with me, Thanks for the review and comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Harry Craft
A loud crack of thunder shook the old house. I love how you use these descriptive sentences when you are describing a situation in your stories. This is a great line too. And the fact that they got to keep Max the dog too! Keep up the great work Carol!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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A loud crack of thunder shook the old house. I love how you use these descriptive sentences when you are describing a situation in your stories. This is a great line too. And the fact that they got to keep Max the dog too! Keep up the great work Carol!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Of course, I had to get Max off the streets and into a nice loving home... Kids, treats, and even a little love from MOm too. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
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Yes, Max needed a home lol!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well played, boys.
All of the best experts agree that all of the dogs people have are the reason monsters stay in hiding.
More dogs people!
D
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Well played, boys.
All of the best experts agree that all of the dogs people have are the reason monsters stay in hiding.
More dogs people!
D
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Just a little amusement to get us through the day. Thanks so much for your kindness. Have a great day!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
I'm in awe. You are in the middle of a novel with lots of twists and turns...and out of nowhere you write this heartwarming story!
Who among us would not be praying Max has a new home?
I thought it so smart that Clark (a teen boy who would relish the chance to put a little scare in mom)-- did not go for the expected trip to his sister's room.
I have two brothers. Believe me they'd have been thinking like Clark!
What a feel good story!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I'm in awe. You are in the middle of a novel with lots of twists and turns...and out of nowhere you write this heartwarming story!
Who among us would not be praying Max has a new home?
I thought it so smart that Clark (a teen boy who would relish the chance to put a little scare in mom)-- did not go for the expected trip to his sister's room.
I have two brothers. Believe me they'd have been thinking like Clark!
What a feel good story!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I've been writing a few lately and have climbed up the ladder for reviewing, short story and I'm still sitting comfortably for now on the novel. though stupid me joined those blind contests and no one ever reads them. One was even my 1000 milestone but I didn't know that when I joined....I won't even get credit for reaching that! LOL
Smiles, Carol
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As writers we know the one who benefits most is ourselves...
But I understand what you mean!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Those background plans are always brewing in the shadows just out of view. And we never know exactly who the culprit is until the stage is set. Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful weekend!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Those background plans are always brewing in the shadows just out of view. And we never know exactly who the culprit is until the stage is set. Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful weekend!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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The plan was to get the dog one way or the other!!! I'm a dog lover and the boy wanted to give Max a home. LOl
Thanks again...
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a lovely story and well written. You bring the reader right into the family dynamic and into the stormy atmosphere. Such a clever young boy and a perfect companion dog.
I saw no errors.
A really fun read!
Julie
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This is a lovely story and well written. You bring the reader right into the family dynamic and into the stormy atmosphere. Such a clever young boy and a perfect companion dog.
I saw no errors.
A really fun read!
Julie
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Julie! It's a dog who needed a home...there wasn't anything else I cold do. LOl Thanks for the review. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a lovely read, Carol, full of atmosphere with the storm brewing outside and everybody cosy within. My mind was racing ahead a bit and I thought Clark was going to pretend that the dog had been abandoned and he'd just rescued it from outside. Your version is obviously better. I'm sure Mum will get used to the idea after the shock! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This is a lovely read, Carol, full of atmosphere with the storm brewing outside and everybody cosy within. My mind was racing ahead a bit and I thought Clark was going to pretend that the dog had been abandoned and he'd just rescued it from outside. Your version is obviously better. I'm sure Mum will get used to the idea after the shock! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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For Max's sake I hope so! Thanks for reading my silly post and for enjoying it as well. I appreciate your time and thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a cute story. There is nothing like a dog to bring happiness and peace into a home. I love this charming and creative story you wrote. I hope she lets him keep the dog.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This is a cute story. There is nothing like a dog to bring happiness and peace into a home. I love this charming and creative story you wrote. I hope she lets him keep the dog.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Of course, he can keep the dog! I couldn't have written the story without a happy ending. LOL Thank you for your kindness and for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
How cute, Carol!! I just love the way you tell a story. There's excitement, danger and intrigue, just kiddo style. Clarke was quite the quick thinker, wasn't he? It all paid off in the end!! As usual, you had a twist at the end. I thought he was going to his sister's room to comfort her so he could prove the dog was useful, instead, you added another layer to it.
Great job,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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How cute, Carol!! I just love the way you tell a story. There's excitement, danger and intrigue, just kiddo style. Clarke was quite the quick thinker, wasn't he? It all paid off in the end!! As usual, you had a twist at the end. I thought he was going to his sister's room to comfort her so he could prove the dog was useful, instead, you added another layer to it.
Great job,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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It would have been to easy to have Amy whimper to mom about how cute Max was and how she felt safe. Clark needed to be that mischievous teenage boy. thanks so much for enjoying!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Love this story. Well written. It was easy to follow. I like the theme of the story. It was so interesting. Great job. It was very clever.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Love this story. Well written. It was easy to follow. I like the theme of the story. It was so interesting. Great job. It was very clever.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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You are so kind, Brenda. I am thrilled that you found enjoyment in my story. I always hope that I tuck away a little slice of me and for a brief moment the reader can feel the love and joy. thank you!
Smiles, Carol