2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, yes, during the eclipse, they finally get to kiss. For the rest of the year, they just admire, and yearn, for each other in the sky. This is truly a "total eclipse of the heart." I love the photo. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Gypsy, yes, during the eclipse, they finally get to kiss. For the rest of the year, they just admire, and yearn, for each other in the sky. This is truly a "total eclipse of the heart." I love the photo. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, M.
Gypsy 😊😘
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I love the idea of the sun and the moon kissing in the dark. They do have an interesting relationship. Your presentation, as usual, is beautiful and perfect. Thank you.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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I love the idea of the sun and the moon kissing in the dark. They do have an interesting relationship. Your presentation, as usual, is beautiful and perfect. Thank you.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much , Barbara 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful Hsiku poem. At times in life both night and day seem to meet, it is then I find it difficult to sift through these Grey areas. I do not know if this is the meaning of your words, but this is what my heart understood.
I am sorry for tge errors, but my network has been giving much trouble. I cannot use my iPad, just my cell p h one, we which is difficult for me to see.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Beautiful Hsiku poem. At times in life both night and day seem to meet, it is then I find it difficult to sift through these Grey areas. I do not know if this is the meaning of your words, but this is what my heart understood.
I am sorry for tge errors, but my network has been giving much trouble. I cannot use my iPad, just my cell p h one, we which is difficult for me to see.
RJ
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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You got it right. I'm sorry about your technical situation, I hate it when that happens.
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
cool imagery - love the sun and the moon eclipse like a kiss
a great satori with the rendezvous -- nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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cool imagery - love the sun and the moon eclipse like a kiss
a great satori with the rendezvous -- nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
I always wondered if they ever were close enough. I used to picture the planets hollering at each other, telling secrets and talking like old friends. But these two are definitely more than friends. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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I always wondered if they ever were close enough. I used to picture the planets hollering at each other, telling secrets and talking like old friends. But these two are definitely more than friends. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
Cool idea you have penned for this club contest. I am a big fan of your alliteration in your last line. Yes, the kiss does happen, but I don't recall that my memory is the same as your artwork.
Mark
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Cool idea you have penned for this club contest. I am a big fan of your alliteration in your last line. Yes, the kiss does happen, but I don't recall that my memory is the same as your artwork.
Mark
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, that rare rendezvous must happen during an eclipse. But I see the moon in the sky during broad daylight so it's surprising that they don't meet up more often. Beautiful pictures!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Ah, that rare rendezvous must happen during an eclipse. But I see the moon in the sky during broad daylight so it's surprising that they don't meet up more often. Beautiful pictures!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love 😊
Marival ❤️
Comment from jessizero
I really enjoyed this "eclipse haiku" for the event. You painted a beautiful mental image with very few words. You must know a million different forms of poetry, and you do each one well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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I really enjoyed this "eclipse haiku" for the event. You painted a beautiful mental image with very few words. You must know a million different forms of poetry, and you do each one well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Jessi
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Sun and Moon, has the proper formatting and acknowledges that the mighty spheres of day and night will sometimes pause at dawn and display their affection.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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This haiku, Sun and Moon, has the proper formatting and acknowledges that the mighty spheres of day and night will sometimes pause at dawn and display their affection.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy hugs 😊