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A Twisted Loop Poem About Prose

a twisted loop poem

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Comment from SimianSavant
Good
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Letting you know that some of your homonyms may get you disqualified when this goes up for vote.

Same spellings, so may not technically qualify: stream, spoke, field

Not the same phonetically: round/around, scenes/seein's (although yes it is quite clever)

There's still some time to amend your entry if you don't want to take the risk of a DQ.

Message me back if you amend this so I can bump it up a star. Regards,

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 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    You are probably right, so I posted an admission in the writer's comments box.
reply by SimianSavant on 09-Sep-2024
    You have to go to the contest listing first, pay the member bucks to enter (unless it's a free entry), and then edit and submit the piece
reply by SimianSavant on 09-Sep-2024
    Never mind, I thought I was replying to someone else!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
    I realize that, thank you. I'll just go to the contest. If I'm disqualified, it won't be the first time. I will try better next time.
Comment from papa55mike
Excellent
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Now that's an interesting prompt to write. You need your thesaurus on that one. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    This may be discontinued for spelling or syllable purposes, but I'm leaving it as it is.