Reviews from
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Fall Seven Times, Stand Up Eight"
Poems Based on Idioms!
2 total reviews
Comment from
patcelaw
This is a nicely written free verse poem, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. In the scripture, it says a good man fall seven times but he gets up again. I just pray that you will be able to keep on getting up. And that you don't have to fall a whole lot more. Patricia.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
Thank you so much for the kind review! And yes, everyone falls but not everyone has the strength to get up and keep going! Have a great rest of your week,
Best,
Videl
Comment from
Bill Schott
This poem, Fall Seven Times Stand Up Eight, sees a man go through the worst there is of mostly self-inflicted errors yet choose life and possibilities over the door in the floor.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
Thank you so much for the 6-stars! I'm glad you liked the poem - this one was a little challenging but nonetheless a fun write!
Best,
Videl
-1- Next Page
The FanStory Store For Writers
Shop unique products for writers.
Shop here.
Get a mug, sweatshirt or tee customized with your poem! Yes, your poem on a
Mug |
Sweatshirt |
Tee