2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 84 "The Stars Veiled Night".
6 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
This is quite the seductive piece you have delivered, Gypsy. The artwork brings this fantasy to life, or vice versa. You certainly know how to capture one's imagination.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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This is quite the seductive piece you have delivered, Gypsy. The artwork brings this fantasy to life, or vice versa. You certainly know how to capture one's imagination.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh cool poem
love the one-liners in-between the tricets
i think it makes the reader stop for a moment
(at least it did for me lol)
nice imagery and smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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ooh cool poem
love the one-liners in-between the tricets
i think it makes the reader stop for a moment
(at least it did for me lol)
nice imagery and smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A yearning and building of insatiable desire in which all the senses are aroused, culminating in the announcement, "I want more." Beautifully expressed and presented, although I wasn't entirely satisfied with "nibble" which seemed a bit out of key with the rest of the wording. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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A yearning and building of insatiable desire in which all the senses are aroused, culminating in the announcement, "I want more." Beautifully expressed and presented, although I wasn't entirely satisfied with "nibble" which seemed a bit out of key with the rest of the wording. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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You are right, nibble doesn't sound good. I went back and forth with it. It's something I remember doing when I was married.. biting gently.. but I biting want to use bite. I changed that phrase.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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I'm much happier now:)
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem of longing covers the memories of the how the beloved sounded, felt, and even tasted. Great use of all the sensations brought to life in your words.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Your poem of longing covers the memories of the how the beloved sounded, felt, and even tasted. Great use of all the sensations brought to life in your words.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, big sister. I hope you're doing well.
Love 😊
Marival ❤️
Comment from GWHARGIS
This poem had a hunger to it. The passion and yearning were infused in each line. I enjoyed how it was written. The wants rolling together and building like a snowball getting bigger as it rolls downhill. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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This poem had a hunger to it. The passion and yearning were infused in each line. I enjoyed how it was written. The wants rolling together and building like a snowball getting bigger as it rolls downhill. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
As always you well of words for writing these poems, is seemingly without depth or end, and you tackle so well, your energy is remarkable, it's so beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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As always you well of words for writing these poems, is seemingly without depth or end, and you tackle so well, your energy is remarkable, it's so beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your kind words and review.
Gypsy
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Welcome Gypsy,