Once and Future
a moon's eye view6 total reviews
Comment from Katiemae1977
Wow. So glad to have read this! This is freeform poetry on steroids. I think it's beautiful, well laid out, evocative and well penned. Good luck in the contest with this gem!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
  |
Wow. So glad to have read this! This is freeform poetry on steroids. I think it's beautiful, well laid out, evocative and well penned. Good luck in the contest with this gem!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
-
Thank you for your great review and your generous stars. Much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
I think the the world is coming to an end because of man's inability to be selfless, Ive never known it to be as bad as now. People using the roadsides to dump rubbish, home disputes, everything has slid from one simple commandment, Love thy neighbour, which is disregarded, it includes everything that spoken of, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
 |
I think the the world is coming to an end because of man's inability to be selfless, Ive never known it to be as bad as now. People using the roadsides to dump rubbish, home disputes, everything has slid from one simple commandment, Love thy neighbour, which is disregarded, it includes everything that spoken of, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
-
Thank you very much--these times are worrying to be sure, and mankind never seems to learn from the lessons of the past--just tries to erase it so we don't look bad.
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
interesting description of magnificence of nature and the planets in a beautiful shuffle of verses, your love for astronomy is amazingly described here in your free form poem, well done
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
|
interesting description of magnificence of nature and the planets in a beautiful shuffle of verses, your love for astronomy is amazingly described here in your free form poem, well done
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
-
Thank you so much for your kind review and generous stars--greatly appreciated.
Comment from zanya
An interesting expose here from the point of view of the moon and developments beneath, so to speak, on planet Earth, as we muddle through!- great pic
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
|
An interesting expose here from the point of view of the moon and developments beneath, so to speak, on planet Earth, as we muddle through!- great pic
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
-
Thak you so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Once and Future, finds the history of the planet from its inception, then through the many movements across the face, bringing the beginning and end of lives and cultures. The future is imagined and the end leads to the renewal again.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
|
This poem, Once and Future, finds the history of the planet from its inception, then through the many movements across the face, bringing the beginning and end of lives and cultures. The future is imagined and the end leads to the renewal again.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
-
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Is this the start of the earth and what the moon observes? I often wonder about our beginnings and whether we keep renewing after destroying ourselves and so the cycle of man's selfish greed continues to devastate with chaos. This is quite an epic journey here through your imagination, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
|
Is this the start of the earth and what the moon observes? I often wonder about our beginnings and whether we keep renewing after destroying ourselves and so the cycle of man's selfish greed continues to devastate with chaos. This is quite an epic journey here through your imagination, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
-
Yes, the moon's eye view of life on Earth from beginning to end. As I re-wrote it for the contest, I had your exact thoughts in mind--do we keep repeating until we get it right and learn to live in peace and harmony with everything else on the planet? Something to think about. Thanks so much for your review.