His Silence
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "His Silence - Chapter Sixteen"Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?
7 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
We are getting closer to discovering what Danielle will learn on her visit. This is a great addition, Jacob; you set the scene well, my friend. I will get to the next chapter now.
God bless.
Steve
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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We are getting closer to discovering what Danielle will learn on her visit. This is a great addition, Jacob; you set the scene well, my friend. I will get to the next chapter now.
God bless.
Steve
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Thank you Steve, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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I am hooked on this story and wish I had time to sit down and read it all at once. I will catch up eventually. I would love to be able to write mine as quickly as you. Work envelopes most of my time.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Well, it looks like I got my horse before my cart. Here's a missing chapter, but that's fine, it is like a flashback, lol. I see you building up suspense and curiosity at this point that comes more to light in the next chapter.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Well, it looks like I got my horse before my cart. Here's a missing chapter, but that's fine, it is like a flashback, lol. I see you building up suspense and curiosity at this point that comes more to light in the next chapter.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
So, she is finally on the road to see where she lived the first six years of her life. I am a little confused as you say she only lived somewhere for three months and that her brother killed her parents after they left this place she is going to. I think you need to check what they are saying about where she lived to make it clearer.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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So, she is finally on the road to see where she lived the first six years of her life. I am a little confused as you say she only lived somewhere for three months and that her brother killed her parents after they left this place she is going to. I think you need to check what they are saying about where she lived to make it clearer.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I keep losing the internet and your review here, Jacob, so I'll be brief. This is a good preparation for Danielle's visit, building tension and providing the reader with an additional timeline about the family's relatively recent move from the house before the killing. There are a couple of edits: begin(ning to warm the back of my neck
two hours(') time
Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I keep losing the internet and your review here, Jacob, so I'll be brief. This is a good preparation for Danielle's visit, building tension and providing the reader with an additional timeline about the family's relatively recent move from the house before the killing. There are a couple of edits: begin(ning to warm the back of my neck
two hours(') time
Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
Surely we will be there by the next post. I unless you take us back to the jail are somewhere else. This is all about her anxious thought fo what it will be like and wondering if she will recognize anything.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Surely we will be there by the next post. I unless you take us back to the jail are somewhere else. This is all about her anxious thought fo what it will be like and wondering if she will recognize anything.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I feel this journey into Danielle's past is going to be traumatic for her. I'm glad she's got Callum with her. I can't wait to read more. It seems like it must be a commune of some sort.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I feel this journey into Danielle's past is going to be traumatic for her. I'm glad she's got Callum with her. I can't wait to read more. It seems like it must be a commune of some sort.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
That was a short one with Danielle stilling tossing her thoughts around in her head... Didn't learn much to move us forward in the story, but hopefully it's about to be unfolded. Thanks for sharing with the reader.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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That was a short one with Danielle stilling tossing her thoughts around in her head... Didn't learn much to move us forward in the story, but hopefully it's about to be unfolded. Thanks for sharing with the reader.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.