2024 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 82 "*~ Harvest Moon ~*"x
6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wounded hearts are definitely a problem even with a beautiful harvest moon. This poem is very emotional. Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. Wonderful job.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Wounded hearts are definitely a problem even with a beautiful harvest moon. This poem is very emotional. Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. Wonderful job.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
Makes me want to weep for the wounded heart. I can just visualize it.
I have to start writing more modern haiku as I'm still stuck in the 3 lines 17 syllables or less old school format. I truly enjoyed this!
Luv,
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Makes me want to weep for the wounded heart. I can just visualize it.
I have to start writing more modern haiku as I'm still stuck in the 3 lines 17 syllables or less old school format. I truly enjoyed this!
Luv,
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Katiemae
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Perhaps as the brightness of the harvest moon is quenched by the sea, the feeling of defeat and or surrender is that of a broken or wounded heart. Beautiful Haiku, that makes one think on many different feelings and emotions.
RJ
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Perhaps as the brightness of the harvest moon is quenched by the sea, the feeling of defeat and or surrender is that of a broken or wounded heart. Beautiful Haiku, that makes one think on many different feelings and emotions.
RJ
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
That's sad. I guess the autumn season with its beautiful moon sinking into the sea reminds the viewer that there is a sadness due to a broken heart. A story well told in a haiku!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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That's sad. I guess the autumn season with its beautiful moon sinking into the sea reminds the viewer that there is a sadness due to a broken heart. A story well told in a haiku!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Big Sister
MariVal 😊 ❤️😘 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
the fs gremlins left some crumbs in your notes lol
loved the imagery of the harvest moon melting into the sea leaving a wounded heart on shore...
another great haiku - loved that bottom pic!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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the fs gremlins left some crumbs in your notes lol
loved the imagery of the harvest moon melting into the sea leaving a wounded heart on shore...
another great haiku - loved that bottom pic!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written contemporary haiku you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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This is a very beautiful and very well written contemporary haiku you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy 😊
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You are so welcome my friend. I am just so glad I had them to give to you. All of your work is six stars in my eyes! love and blessings, Teri