His Silence
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "His Silence - Chapter Fourteen"Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?
7 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Well, it looks like they're going to go through with it. It'll be interesting to see what happens and if they'll stay. What will they find out I wonder.
This is another great chapter, Jacob.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Well, it looks like they're going to go through with it. It'll be interesting to see what happens and if they'll stay. What will they find out I wonder.
This is another great chapter, Jacob.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I agree with her idea of going immediately. It would be too easy to talk herself out of it or scare herself out of it. But ultimately, she needs to know why her bother killed their parents.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I agree with her idea of going immediately. It would be too easy to talk herself out of it or scare herself out of it. But ultimately, she needs to know why her bother killed their parents.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to find out what they discover at Danielle's old house and her parents' friends. I am glad Callum's going with her. You're doing a good job writing this. Are you going to get back to Stacey??
he'd give your mate Rob a run for his money. (mate, Rob)
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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I can't wait to find out what they discover at Danielle's old house and her parents' friends. I am glad Callum's going with her. You're doing a good job writing this. Are you going to get back to Stacey??
he'd give your mate Rob a run for his money. (mate, Rob)
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I will get back to The Fix. I needed to take a break from it as I wasn't feeling it as I was writing; I wanted to start this one and I've now nearly finished the first draft so I am at a much more advanced stage with it. Once I've finished it, hopefully in the next week or so, I'll get back to The Fix.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Jacob,
In this chapter, we learn that Danielle and Callum have decided to go visit the mysterious place, maybe compound, that Harvey has sent her to. Maybe, there, she will get a clue as to why Callum goes to the extreme of killing his parents. It is interesting and well written.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Hi Jacob,
In this chapter, we learn that Danielle and Callum have decided to go visit the mysterious place, maybe compound, that Harvey has sent her to. Maybe, there, she will get a clue as to why Callum goes to the extreme of killing his parents. It is interesting and well written.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thank you Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
It is interesting about Oliver seeming to be drawing her to visit the place. I assume Jeremiah most have told her the names of all the people in the picture. I surprised she would remember them all though. I know this story is going to complicated because you have a lot of characters listed that haven't been introduced. I didn't remember her brother killing a third person.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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It is interesting about Oliver seeming to be drawing her to visit the place. I assume Jeremiah most have told her the names of all the people in the picture. I surprised she would remember them all though. I know this story is going to complicated because you have a lot of characters listed that haven't been introduced. I didn't remember her brother killing a third person.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thank you Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. It was mentioned in the second chapter.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Just a weekend away will fix it with Danielle's parents? Once again, some very credibly composed dialogue which builds up character so proficiently. I'm really enjoying the pace of this story, Jacob. It's full of twists and turns and has a good, mysterious edge to it. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Just a weekend away will fix it with Danielle's parents? Once again, some very credibly composed dialogue which builds up character so proficiently. I'm really enjoying the pace of this story, Jacob. It's full of twists and turns and has a good, mysterious edge to it. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thank you Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
She's determined to go regardless of what she might find and Callum has agreed which gives her moe strength. Wonder how she will tell her parents or if she will tell them the truth. And what happens when she arrives and meets these people...will she get the answers she's looking for? Great job of leaving the reader wanting to know more.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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She's determined to go regardless of what she might find and Callum has agreed which gives her moe strength. Wonder how she will tell her parents or if she will tell them the truth. And what happens when she arrives and meets these people...will she get the answers she's looking for? Great job of leaving the reader wanting to know more.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.