His Silence
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "His Silence - Chapter Five"Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?
7 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi, I've been reading your book, from prologue onward. You have a very interesting writing style and a unique plot. You've given great background without giving anything away. I'm eager to learn who this Jerimiah is and what he has to do with the whole affair. Of course, I'm also eager to discover what Harvey has to say.
I'll keep on, and pop in now and then to let you know my thoughts,
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Hi, I've been reading your book, from prologue onward. You have a very interesting writing style and a unique plot. You've given great background without giving anything away. I'm eager to learn who this Jerimiah is and what he has to do with the whole affair. Of course, I'm also eager to discover what Harvey has to say.
I'll keep on, and pop in now and then to let you know my thoughts,
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review Rhonda. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting part of your story. Danielle does what anyone would do, looks for more information on her dead parents, brother, and Ian Jones. She seems to get along well with her adoptive family, but the past will always haunt her until she learns why. One little problem: . . . my (family's) name . . .
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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This is an interesting part of your story. Danielle does what anyone would do, looks for more information on her dead parents, brother, and Ian Jones. She seems to get along well with her adoptive family, but the past will always haunt her until she learns why. One little problem: . . . my (family's) name . . .
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Were they in witness protection, or maybe really into illegal stuff. I can't wait to see why Harvey murdered them, but I feel he did it to protect his sister in some way. I really like this story.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Were they in witness protection, or maybe really into illegal stuff. I can't wait to see why Harvey murdered them, but I feel he did it to protect his sister in some way. I really like this story.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I really enjoyed this chapter concerning Daniele's thoughts and investigation. The quandary she's in is very realistically expressed and her emotional perspective stands in marked contrast to the more dispassionate and factual newspaper report which throws up some very interesting further information from the neighbour. Excellently done, Jacob! Take care Debbie
I type in my famil(y')s name
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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I really enjoyed this chapter concerning Daniele's thoughts and investigation. The quandary she's in is very realistically expressed and her emotional perspective stands in marked contrast to the more dispassionate and factual newspaper report which throws up some very interesting further information from the neighbour. Excellently done, Jacob! Take care Debbie
I type in my famil(y')s name
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you Debbie, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Neonewman
The mystery continues. This is progressing nicely, Jacob. Like a balloon filling with water, it's bound to burst soon. I'm wondering why Harvey killed them. I can understand the theories that come into existence, as people have to know what happened.
Great job, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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The mystery continues. This is progressing nicely, Jacob. Like a balloon filling with water, it's bound to burst soon. I'm wondering why Harvey killed them. I can understand the theories that come into existence, as people have to know what happened.
Great job, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you Steve, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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My pleasure, Jacob.
Comment from BethShelby
I learn more in bits and pieces. You know how to build suspense. Much hof what the story told deepens the mystery. I will looking forward to you next post.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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I learn more in bits and pieces. You know how to build suspense. Much hof what the story told deepens the mystery. I will looking forward to you next post.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you Beth, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Sounds like a strange family that had something to hide even before the murders occurred. And it makes me wonder if Harvey is protecting someone... even possibly Danielle (though it seems unlikely that at six she could have committed the gruesome murders). You've given the reader much to think about.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Sounds like a strange family that had something to hide even before the murders occurred. And it makes me wonder if Harvey is protecting someone... even possibly Danielle (though it seems unlikely that at six she could have committed the gruesome murders). You've given the reader much to think about.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
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You are most welcome!