Murder At The Berkshire
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Senior Sleuth Society"Things aren't as they seem at the elderly home.
9 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
Douglas.
I'm caught up on all the chapters and I can't stop snickering.
I can easily picture each chatector in my mind as I'm reading through the story.
I love the names to go with each. Very creative.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
John
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Douglas.
I'm caught up on all the chapters and I can't stop snickering.
I can easily picture each chatector in my mind as I'm reading through the story.
I love the names to go with each. Very creative.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
John
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thanks, John. I am on a good path!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is such a refreshing and humorous story, Doug, and a delight each time to pick up again. You've absolutely nailed it with your alliterative character portrayals and, with Hattie at the helm, things can only go from strength to strength in their murder investigation. Plus, it's always so inspiring to believe (even in fantasy) that old age can be fun and adventurous after all. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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This is such a refreshing and humorous story, Doug, and a delight each time to pick up again. You've absolutely nailed it with your alliterative character portrayals and, with Hattie at the helm, things can only go from strength to strength in their murder investigation. Plus, it's always so inspiring to believe (even in fantasy) that old age can be fun and adventurous after all. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Debbie. Sounds like this one is turning out well!
Comment from royowen
Judiverse wrote a script on something similar to this, I love the added, descriptive applications and personality traits additions to the story, with the evidenced quirkiness and differences of the characters, the theme seems incidental to the plot, well done Douglas, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Judiverse wrote a script on something similar to this, I love the added, descriptive applications and personality traits additions to the story, with the evidenced quirkiness and differences of the characters, the theme seems incidental to the plot, well done Douglas, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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I shall look for it. Thank you!
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good job
Comment from Ulla
Hi Douglas, this is a tally a fun read. Everyone seems to have a great time and so do I reading this story. It really makes me smile and wanting to reading on. All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Hi Douglas, this is a tally a fun read. Everyone seems to have a great time and so do I reading this story. It really makes me smile and wanting to reading on. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Oh my goodness. Coming from you, that really means a lot to me. Thank you!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
And the plot thickens. This is a fun mystery, and I am really enjoying reading this. It's a light story unlike the rest you've written. Easy reading.
I'm glad Detective Steele is hunky too, but probably not a hunky as Greg.
He was a friend of my deceased husband Paul. (husband,)
who visits every Sunday." Joy revealed. (Sunday,)
found Mr. Howell dead on the floor between his bed and the Davenport. (davenport)
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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And the plot thickens. This is a fun mystery, and I am really enjoying reading this. It's a light story unlike the rest you've written. Easy reading.
I'm glad Detective Steele is hunky too, but probably not a hunky as Greg.
He was a friend of my deceased husband Paul. (husband,)
who visits every Sunday." Joy revealed. (Sunday,)
found Mr. Howell dead on the floor between his bed and the Davenport. (davenport)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you, my friend. More incredible assists! Thanks for taking the time.
Comment from Begin Again
Senior sleuths sound just as mysterious as ghosts as detectives. Hopefully, they can hold their train of thought long enough to track down some of this information. Very humorous and a fun read.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Senior sleuths sound just as mysterious as ghosts as detectives. Hopefully, they can hold their train of thought long enough to track down some of this information. Very humorous and a fun read.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you! This is running along smoothly.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nicely written. Good plotting.
The boner floor, huh? (smiley face here)
Davenport should not be capitalized.
Danny DeVito.
Your story continues to hold my interest. Good work and best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Nicely written. Good plotting.
The boner floor, huh? (smiley face here)
Davenport should not be capitalized.
Danny DeVito.
Your story continues to hold my interest. Good work and best wishes.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thanks, my friend!
Comment from BethShelby
The seniors sound like they've returned to their teens. I guess they need something to keep their minds active. This story reminds me of Judy's story of the lady in the senior center who keeps solving murder mysteries.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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The seniors sound like they've returned to their teens. I guess they need something to keep their minds active. This story reminds me of Judy's story of the lady in the senior center who keeps solving murder mysteries.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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I have seen that reverse back to teen years in some elderly centers. Tried to capture it!
Comment from Wendy G
Well, they are an unlikely group of detectives, but they'll have fun, and probably solve plenty of untoward happenings. The idea of such a facility is very unnerving. Hope I never end up in one. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Well, they are an unlikely group of detectives, but they'll have fun, and probably solve plenty of untoward happenings. The idea of such a facility is very unnerving. Hope I never end up in one. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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I odd take
My children to one when they were infants as the elderly enjoyed them immensely. Now they do art shows for several.
This story was written with one of this laces in mind, roughly.