Ol' Silver and Red
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Ol' Silver and Red, ch 10"Medeival Ohmie and the dragon Ol' Silver and Red
6 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Still off traveling it's been a struggle to find reading time, but it's always a pleasure to drop in and find out what Ohmie's up to. Now, I just wish I had my own dragon to ride. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Still off traveling it's been a struggle to find reading time, but it's always a pleasure to drop in and find out what Ohmie's up to. Now, I just wish I had my own dragon to ride. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Thanks. I've been traveling myself.
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Hope your traveling is for pleasure and you're enjoying every minute of it!
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It is, and is. Thanks.
Comment from lyenochka
It's thoughtful of Ohmie to consider preparing Prince Shauconnery for his upcoming kingship someday and allowing him to come along and even pretend to be piloting the dragon. Yay, Ohmie - a true hero who doesn't keep all the glory for himself!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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It's thoughtful of Ohmie to consider preparing Prince Shauconnery for his upcoming kingship someday and allowing him to come along and even pretend to be piloting the dragon. Yay, Ohmie - a true hero who doesn't keep all the glory for himself!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate your support.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Ohmie used his brain again to find a way to tame a dragon, more or less. The kingdom of Ohmie's father-in-law has been enriched by the dragon's treasure and Prince Shauconnery now looks like a capable young ruler. Everyone is happy, except maybe the dragon. You have one problem in this chapter: You have used the wrong word for "reins". Good story and a fun one as well.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Ohmie used his brain again to find a way to tame a dragon, more or less. The kingdom of Ohmie's father-in-law has been enriched by the dragon's treasure and Prince Shauconnery now looks like a capable young ruler. Everyone is happy, except maybe the dragon. You have one problem in this chapter: You have used the wrong word for "reins". Good story and a fun one as well.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your great review.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
Another great post! I really like your writing style. hope that this story ends well. The bold font was easy to read too, so thank you for that. Keep on posting and happy writing!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Another great post! I really like your writing style. hope that this story ends well. The bold font was easy to read too, so thank you for that. Keep on posting and happy writing!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much.
I truly appreciate your very kind review!
Comment from BethShelby
I'm sure wasn't your intention, but my childhood grief at seeing the Giants having to be slain in my storybook kicked in and I started to feel very sorry for this poor dragon who was acutely tortured, starved and robbed of his gold. My sympathy often goes to the underdog even when he is almost as big as a barn.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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I'm sure wasn't your intention, but my childhood grief at seeing the Giants having to be slain in my storybook kicked in and I started to feel very sorry for this poor dragon who was acutely tortured, starved and robbed of his gold. My sympathy often goes to the underdog even when he is almost as big as a barn.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you.
At least I didn't kill him, which is the fate of most dragons. And the eye and the tail were sort of accidental injuries. (smiley face here)
Tank you for your very kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
It was well-done and didn't seem needlessly long at all. An interesting chapter and I liked the way Ohmie learned to control a dragon. That's something Sinbad never did! Also liked the fact the Princess and he seem to be more intimate.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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It was well-done and didn't seem needlessly long at all. An interesting chapter and I liked the way Ohmie learned to control a dragon. That's something Sinbad never did! Also liked the fact the Princess and he seem to be more intimate.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you.
I'm kinda big on intimacy!
smiley face here
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Not so much me, while I am alone.