Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

This is a well-crafted chapter, offering a bit of suspense and tension. I enjoy fantasy, as I'm sure most folks do. I found this piece of fantasy to be a great read.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate your time and feedback, and I hope you have a wonderful rest of your week.

reply by Neonewman on 07-Aug-2024

My pleasure, K, I love fantasy.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written and it flows very well when it just read it loud. I enjoyed listening to it very much. Your sentence structure your paragraph and you're overall presentation is very good. I wish you a very, very good week and God bless you. Pat.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful week.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This part of the story is rich in tension. I like how Ilati's showed courage in standing up for Eigou despite the risk. It shows her strength and determination. The suspense of the prophecy and the threat of Eigou's possible execution really adds tension! I'm eager to see what happens next.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate your time and feedback, and I hope you have a wonderful rest of your week.