Breaking Free
Emerging From Shadows of Deceit10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This tetractys, Breaking Free, has the proper formatting and seems to speak of the punishment of a thousand cuts that sometimes describes a dying relationship.
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This tetractys, Breaking Free, has the proper formatting and seems to speak of the punishment of a thousand cuts that sometimes describes a dying relationship.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, it is often the constant subtle jabs which reduce a person's self esteem, or in fact the withdrawal of discussion about important things because the other's opinion doesn't count. Well said. Best wishes for the contest and for reclaiming light.
Wendy
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Yes, it is often the constant subtle jabs which reduce a person's self esteem, or in fact the withdrawal of discussion about important things because the other's opinion doesn't count. Well said. Best wishes for the contest and for reclaiming light.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from Gunner Lil
A great job in meeting the requirements for the contest.
You also have selected a wonderful picture.
An easy read with a nice flow.
Thank you for sharing and good luck.
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A great job in meeting the requirements for the contest.
You also have selected a wonderful picture.
An easy read with a nice flow.
Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Sometimes we don't even realize how certain little thing affect the way we think of ourselves from day to day. It's not right and no one has that right to take away who we really are. God made us to shine in his light. It's glorious when we can rise and raise our heads high to be who we want to be.
Smiles, Carol
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Sometimes we don't even realize how certain little thing affect the way we think of ourselves from day to day. It's not right and no one has that right to take away who we really are. God made us to shine in his light. It's glorious when we can rise and raise our heads high to be who we want to be.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Tetractys contest. I like the picture you chose to add to the poem's presentation and the way you emphasized the final line of the poem to show the reclaiming of the writer's power. Very nicely done.
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An excellent entry for the Tetractys contest. I like the picture you chose to add to the poem's presentation and the way you emphasized the final line of the poem to show the reclaiming of the writer's power. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
An interesting form and you have accomplished it beautifully. I enjoyed ready your tetractys poem with the precise syllable count.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
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An interesting form and you have accomplished it beautifully. I enjoyed ready your tetractys poem with the precise syllable count.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was great. I think my favorite line was the "subtle jabs" which is how it is done. The imagery of rising from a cloud was so beautiful. I thought your poem reminds us tha twe do have the strength to overcome and shine again. Truly inspiring!
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I thought this was great. I think my favorite line was the "subtle jabs" which is how it is done. The imagery of rising from a cloud was so beautiful. I thought your poem reminds us tha twe do have the strength to overcome and shine again. Truly inspiring!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from gansach
This is a nice entry for the Tetractys Contest writing prompt. You have the correct syllable and line count, your photo is a nice illustration, and your words are inspirational. Nicely done!
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This is a nice entry for the Tetractys Contest writing prompt. You have the correct syllable and line count, your photo is a nice illustration, and your words are inspirational. Nicely done!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry to the contest. Good luck with that!!
I like it! And your last two lines even rhymed oh I guess they're within the same line but it seems like two lines
These short poems make it really hard to say anything in them
But you broke that mold you actually have a message here
Someone's kicked you down and now you go beyond them to greener pastures and I don't mean to another man or woman. I just mean to get away from him or her
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry to the contest. Good luck with that!!
I like it! And your last two lines even rhymed oh I guess they're within the same line but it seems like two lines
These short poems make it really hard to say anything in them
But you broke that mold you actually have a message here
Someone's kicked you down and now you go beyond them to greener pastures and I don't mean to another man or woman. I just mean to get away from him or her
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent post and a lovely upbeat entry in this the tectrachys poetry contest, I always like artwork with the sun rising optimistically over the darkened cloud, beautifully written, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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This is an excellent post and a lovely upbeat entry in this the tectrachys poetry contest, I always like artwork with the sun rising optimistically over the darkened cloud, beautifully written, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024