2024 Japanese Poetry
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8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I can honestly say that when I sit by a creek or anywhere and silently reflect on my previous husband, it's not sadness. It's gratitude that I got out of that situation alive. I enjoyed reading and your presentation was excellent.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I can honestly say that when I sit by a creek or anywhere and silently reflect on my previous husband, it's not sadness. It's gratitude that I got out of that situation alive. I enjoyed reading and your presentation was excellent.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i kept wanting to add 'the' before creek...
sitting by the creek of tears
but that could be just me, too lol
a great jisei poem of haunting memories...
nice imagery and cool pics and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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i kept wanting to add 'the' before creek...
sitting by the creek of tears
but that could be just me, too lol
a great jisei poem of haunting memories...
nice imagery and cool pics and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Very cool, indeed. A requiem can be for a deceased relationship every bit as for a deceased person. Well done, with such an intense and hauntingly beautiful graphic to spotlight the well-chosen words. Perfection! xxoxo
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Very cool, indeed. A requiem can be for a deceased relationship every bit as for a deceased person. Well done, with such an intense and hauntingly beautiful graphic to spotlight the well-chosen words. Perfection! xxoxo
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle.
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Always my pleasure.
Comment from GWHARGIS
The empty promises that seem to be a backdrop for this, whisper like the water. Some visits bring peace, while others only stir up pain and reopen old wounds. This poem was beautiful as it told a story of incomplete love. Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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The empty promises that seem to be a backdrop for this, whisper like the water. Some visits bring peace, while others only stir up pain and reopen old wounds. This poem was beautiful as it told a story of incomplete love. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
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Comment from RJ Heritage
Although I do not quite know all the phrasing of this poetry form, I do understand the aspects of flow and connectivity in the written word. This does an excellent job of both. I also like the imagery that the picture brings in complementing the overall delivery.
Well done.
RJ
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Although I do not quite know all the phrasing of this poetry form, I do understand the aspects of flow and connectivity in the written word. This does an excellent job of both. I also like the imagery that the picture brings in complementing the overall delivery.
Well done.
RJ
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Your welcome
RJ
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Neonewman
This has my mind in a whirlwind. Did she kill him or her, did they kill themselves, or is she dead? What an intriguing piece you have crafted, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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This has my mind in a whirlwind. Did she kill him or her, did they kill themselves, or is she dead? What an intriguing piece you have crafted, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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the man died but it could be the end of a relationship
Thank you very much, Steve.
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Yeah! definitely.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A dark and poignant verse primarily about death and the "last walk" of the past. But, simultaneously, of nature's transience and empathy in its own song of a requiem chant. Beautifully presented. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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A dark and poignant verse primarily about death and the "last walk" of the past. But, simultaneously, of nature's transience and empathy in its own song of a requiem chant. Beautifully presented. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I like that that water sings a "requiem" as it seems that the relationship is over or the loved one is dead. At any rate, places of water always bring some solace and comfort.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I like that that water sings a "requiem" as it seems that the relationship is over or the loved one is dead. At any rate, places of water always bring some solace and comfort.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Yes, he could be dead or the relationship may have come to the end.
Thank you very much, big sister. You got it right, as always 😊❤️❤️
love
marival