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Comment from Earl Corp
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This needs some heavy duty editing. In the second paragraph did you mean to type suspected three times in a row? The whole piece is littered with funky a's that is distracting. You also need to tighten up your spacing.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
    thanks a lot
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
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Hi, you have been blessed so much, and happy for you and your family too. Thank you for all of you in the services for our great country! Plus, I totally agreed with your description about Seattle. I've been there, and the prettiest thing is the Mt. Rainier National Park. Also, I like your detail descriptions, and your lifestyle of multi-foods & multi-ethnicities. I too love traveling as much as I can, and when I can traveling, I've included the Missionary Volunteering works too. Best of luck to your Blog writing.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
    thanks a lot
reply by iDri.Luv.Jesus on 22-Jul-2024
    You are welcome! :)