Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Beautifully done with that mesmerising image accompanied by your delightful nonet complete with monorhyme! Like the 'yay' at the end. A strong contender! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024

Thanks Debbie. So glad you like it.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

The Nonet format works very well here as it jaunts along with a lively rhythm as it takes the reader from 'a boring, miserable day.' to the sun coming out.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024

Thanks Zanya.

Comment from Gunner Lil

Exceptional

This reader loved the picture used.
An easy read that has a lot to say with much emotion about a lost day of playing outdoors.
Wonder flow and pace.
Thank you for sharing and good luck.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for the wonderful review and super stars.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nonet, Looking Through the Window, has the proper formatting and leads the readers through the sad to glad process as the picture of the world brightens with the passing of the limiting rain. Nice.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Thanks Bill