2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 74 "Goodbye Letter".
5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I am sure many people could have written that goodbye letter to their spouse. Of course, not a eloquently as you did. The presentation was perfect.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I am sure many people could have written that goodbye letter to their spouse. Of course, not a eloquently as you did. The presentation was perfect.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. ❤️
Gypsy hugs
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and an extremely powerful one, full of regret and longing, for what was and what should have been said but wasn't and now never will be
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and an extremely powerful one, full of regret and longing, for what was and what should have been said but wasn't and now never will be
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike.
I appreciate your exceptional six-stars review and words.
Gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is so exquisite. I could feel his heart-wrenching pain. For me, it started with the words "marble cold body." Ah, regret! I love this cautionary tale about it. So very well done, Gypsy...yet again!
xoxoxo
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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This is so exquisite. I could feel his heart-wrenching pain. For me, it started with the words "marble cold body." Ah, regret! I love this cautionary tale about it. So very well done, Gypsy...yet again!
xoxoxo
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle. Your lovely reviews mean a lot to me. You are someone I admire in fanstory.
Gypsy hugs
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What a lovely thing to say to me. I know you know it's mutual! xoxox
Comment from shelley kaye
cool goodbye letter
you did a great job writing it from a man to his late wife
with much sorrow and tenderness
weaved between the lines
dripping with emotion
perfect pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing (and for the awesome example for the prompt!)
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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cool goodbye letter
you did a great job writing it from a man to his late wife
with much sorrow and tenderness
weaved between the lines
dripping with emotion
perfect pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing (and for the awesome example for the prompt!)
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Who is "Cillian Johnson"? It's always awful when the loved one dies before any time is left to restore the relationship. It seems like the two had a fight and then she was gone. My pastor has been to so many funeral services and he learned from it all that it's important to say how much people mean to us to them while they are still alive!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Who is "Cillian Johnson"? It's always awful when the loved one dies before any time is left to restore the relationship. It seems like the two had a fight and then she was gone. My pastor has been to so many funeral services and he learned from it all that it's important to say how much people mean to us to them while they are still alive!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you for asking, the poem and Cillian Johnson are fictional. I added that in my author notes.
I tell my children and grandchildren and friends I love you all and ever night I give thanks for all of you to God.
Thank you very much, big sister.
I love you
Marival