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Rise and Shine

Nature 3-5-3

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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Mother Earth gives very wet and sloppy kisses!! Who knew? I guess she gives what her recipients need. Sweet poem, accompanied by the loveliest and most pertinent of photos. Good luck in the Nature 3-5-3 Poem Contest!! xoxo

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
    lol Thanks so much, beautiful!
    Xoxo
Comment from AP Apgar
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What an excellent poem and picture presentation supporting - Mother Nature waking her children with a good morning kiss - well done - all in ten syllables- Bless / Alan

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much, Alan!
    Xoxo
Comment from gansach
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This is a nice entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt competition. Your photo is a nice complement to the picture you paint with your words. A dewy morning in summer can present a beautiful scene reminding us of the good things mother earth provides. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
    Xo
    Jess
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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The writing is so small. But, the picture is pristeen and the poetry is ethereal. Well done. All this moving stuff wears me out. Enjoy your weekend, Karen

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
    Xoxo
Comment from QC Poet
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A very nice nature 3-5-3 expresses the way mother earth takes care of wild plants and flowers you captured the essence of the morning dews purpose nicely Good Job and Best of Luck in the contest

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
    Xo
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Jess.
-A well written poem with effective
imagery and personification, Jess.
-You get our attention in the opening
lines as the "saplings wake."
-A very good second line, and
a good reference to "mother earth"
who takes care of her world.
-A very good entry; good luck!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much, Pam! Xoxo
reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Jul-2024
    You are very welcome, Jess.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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We too, awaken as saplings wake to each new day filled with opportunity and possibility. Your poem directs our focus to the beauty and wisdom of nature. The picture of your beautiful dew kissed sprig perfectly compliments your poetry. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
    Xo
Comment from Steve Foreman
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Very nice, fits the 3-5-3 and subject matter criteria. It evokes nature and natural growth (obviously influenced by the image used!). Well done!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
    Xo
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao!

I love to see the morning dew on my patch of green. It starts to glisten like tiny gems as the sun rises.

I also love that bright yellow/green of new growth. Often I get the urge to eat it.

After a downfall, I go out and drink the last raindrops on the tips of the leaves.


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
    Xo
reply by tempeste on 12-Jul-2024
    My pleasure! 🙂
Comment from Begin Again
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WE are always so busy with our own lives that we take the nature around us for granted at times. Everything under goes changes, especially things that grow, as mother nature provides the necessities of life in beautiful yet small ways.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
    Xo