Beauty Of A Sunrise
Sunrise and beauty surrounding it.9 total reviews
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
Wow, Brenda! Just beautiful! And pristine, just like the lake you're describing! The word radiant!! I haven't seen or heard that word in awhile, it's so perfect! Another succinct gem written by you! Maddy
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Wow, Brenda! Just beautiful! And pristine, just like the lake you're describing! The word radiant!! I haven't seen or heard that word in awhile, it's so perfect! Another succinct gem written by you! Maddy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Hi Maddie. Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I love these little poems. Succinct, pithy, and stuff. I like it, of course. My brain is just tired. I just wrote "The Elevator" for a contest. It is suitably snarky. I cracked myself up with this one. Send me good wishes please for my move on the 20th. I will be going to Houston to get my stuff out of storage for 25+ years of memories. Half will be donated, You can't put a 3 bedroom house in a one bedroom apartment. It will be tough, but then it will be over. I can finish nesting and get on building my new life. I will be happy here. My sister's seem to adore me. What good taste they have! :-) Karen
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I love these little poems. Succinct, pithy, and stuff. I like it, of course. My brain is just tired. I just wrote "The Elevator" for a contest. It is suitably snarky. I cracked myself up with this one. Send me good wishes please for my move on the 20th. I will be going to Houston to get my stuff out of storage for 25+ years of memories. Half will be donated, You can't put a 3 bedroom house in a one bedroom apartment. It will be tough, but then it will be over. I can finish nesting and get on building my new life. I will be happy here. My sister's seem to adore me. What good taste they have! :-) Karen
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Hi Karen. Thank you for the review. Good luck with moving. I moved about a year ago. So much work. I'll be moving to New York within the next 6 months. I wish you the best in your new place. Love, Brenda
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Why are you going to New York? What part? :-)
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We are selling our house. We have land in new york. We want a smaller place. Our house has 4 bedrooms and 2 bathrooms. It is getting too much for us. Addison, New York
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Do you have family there.? Take my advice, ddon't live in the house as it is being built. Rent or buy a trailer you can resell while your house goes up. That way you can be somewhere clean and tidy where everything works.
It will save your marriage. a backed up sewer line can kill all hope of romance"-)
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Actually, yhe house we are selling we built it, never do it again. I hope yo Dave my marriage by starting over somewhere else. Thank you for your concern.
Comment from Wendy G
I like the alliteration which sits well with the beautiful image accompanying your well chosen words. Very good entry. Sending you best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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I like the alliteration which sits well with the beautiful image accompanying your well chosen words. Very good entry. Sending you best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your great review. I'm glad you liked it. No one voted for it in the contest. Sometimes, I can't figure out their choices.
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I too am frequently amazed at what places and what is not placed. Sometimes people vote for what is "different" or funny or original, in preference to what is beautiful.
I have almost given up on contests. One spends a lo to ente and promote, and then if places are tied, one might get back only a couple of dollars in prize money. One just has to write to please oneself in the end and be satisfied just with knowing you have created a beautiful piece.
W
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Thank you for your advice. I think I'm going to stop entering contests for a while too. I'm just going to do the best I can.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Beauty of a Sunrise, has the proper formatting and provides the words which lead to the image of the horizon exploding with light from the new day's sun. Nice.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This 3-5-3, Beauty of a Sunrise, has the proper formatting and provides the words which lead to the image of the horizon exploding with light from the new day's sun. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your nice review
Comment from bonespur
This short little poem is very descriptive. Your choice of words expanded my thought train exponentially. Good job. Good luck with the contest. I hope you have a blessed day
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This short little poem is very descriptive. Your choice of words expanded my thought train exponentially. Good job. Good luck with the contest. I hope you have a blessed day
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review. I was thinking maybe I should have changed the words. Oh well, too late now.
Comment from Shanbreen
I like the contrast between the radiant poppies and the calmness of the lake even though they both receive the same radiant beams from the sun. You have done a good job in your 3-5-3 poem. Best for the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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I like the contrast between the radiant poppies and the calmness of the lake even though they both receive the same radiant beams from the sun. You have done a good job in your 3-5-3 poem. Best for the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from jessizero
I keep counting "radiant" as three syllables, but I guess it's two. I liked your poem for the "nature 3-5-3" contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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I keep counting "radiant" as three syllables, but I guess it's two. I liked your poem for the "nature 3-5-3" contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your haiku captures a moment beautifully. The imagery is so impressive. I could see the sun's radiant beams and the still lake. You share the beauty of this so well. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Your haiku captures a moment beautifully. The imagery is so impressive. I could see the sun's radiant beams and the still lake. You share the beauty of this so well. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I get very beautiful imagery from this piece. I wish it could be expanded upon but I understand the confines of the rules of the contest. Thank you for sharing and best of luck.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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I get very beautiful imagery from this piece. I wish it could be expanded upon but I understand the confines of the rules of the contest. Thank you for sharing and best of luck.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review.